good start! can't wait to see where it goes.

Well, I really like this start so far. I'm so sad for Edward, but glad that Bella found him and stopped him from his plan. There's so much sadness and torment in his thoughts; it's like he just has no hope. There's so much unknown right now in this story, so I'll be very curious to see how everything plays out (especially after the prologue, which I think scares me more than this chapter).

I'm really enjoying your writing style...I can't explain exactly what I like about it, but it's kind of beautiful.