Poor Xander. What a conundrum.

"you were a vampire." Yes! There it is!

Eeee, revelations! *does the happy dance*

Now I'm wondering how Xander's going to explain the whole "you used to be a vampire" thing. I mean, he can't keep quiet about it forever.

Oooh, I was wondering if this was a Spike has amnesia story.

I love Xander's thoughts on the differences between Sunnydale, living on a Hellmouth, and San Francisco, living in a place where there aren't demons around every corner. Nicely done!

Xander's realization that he could be the interesting person. Wow. Amazing!

I just finished reading most of your spander stories and I must say, I really love how you wrote them! It's been a real pleasure to delve in the mind of xander. Oh and the "gay knights who say ne" was absolutely fantastic! Always been a slut for monty pythons references.

good.

It been a quite a ride. The length is not too short or too long. The ending was ok, but it is hard to write. Still overall lovely.

That soooo hot.

Spike being the attraction in peepshow is my guilty pleasure.

Wow. Just found this story and I love it. Great job.

Oooh, nicely characterized, and the memory issue was well handled. Your characters are very well rounded, which is rare in a fanfic author. You didn't demonize anyone, or put them up for sainthood. Well done.

The basic plot of how it ended is satisfyingly fluffy with some tension first, but I agree with your orriginal assessment that it could use some editing and would expand easily to 2 chapters or more.

Still, thank you for coming back to this, and I hope we see more spander from you in the future.

No. no. The ending isn't abrupt. I liked it. The way you used the dialogue and awkwardness to propel the action forward instead of holding it back was effective. You could have ramped up the tension a little more to really get Xander to break but it was a good ending. Keep writing.

Love from the Dorkside;

Tropic