By random chance I read this on Thanksgiving!
Great story by the way.

Awwwwwwwww! 10/10! As annoying as Keller is, this was amazing :D I hope Evan finds me some day... *sigh*. Your interpretation of him is perfect. It makes me jealous that you can write to well ;)

Wow what a great story, I enjoyed it so much and love Jennifer and Evan together. Well done :-)

I felt it worth the pain of logging in to tell you how wonderful that story was. Not quite the humor of the SG universe I'm used to, but still good.

thank you for writing this awesome story

the follow up chapter was really amazing

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i got so wrapped up last night that i kind of skipped reviewing ...

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i am happy that abby came around

aunt sarah was about the creepiest possible relative but fun to read

richard is pushy

now i am off to the rest

jenn chose a pretty stupid moment to call her dad huh?

i love love love the banter (can you call it that) between jenn and her dad

kind of wondering why evan isn't obsessing about the beautiful thing (but i guess guys just don't do that ...)

i can practically see how evan freezes on the beach at first ...

it is a thing that happens often when i read your stuff, you write so that the reader can see and feel with the characters

'thumbs up'

evans final thoughts are sweet and i can imagine this character feeling this way

i loved jenn's dad with his no nonsense approach in throwing his daughter out of the house to get the guy ...

the adoption thing is a great idea ;)

thank god i am at home and in the kitchen alone...

i laughed so much at the kid sister part :)

you have a talent for great one liners ...

the sublte romantic hints are cute and richard is great too

how long is evan travelling?

(oh never mind my questions... i tend to write out all i think)

so i start my catching up with your story :)

god my heart went out to evan he sounded broken

i am still hoping for abby to come around

btw jenn's dad is so cool

loved their exchange and interaction

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Very nice work... I loved this one... it was a great story, excellent!

You added an epilogue of sorts! Yay - loved the happy ending you gave them. I liked that our usually unflappable Major was nervous about getting his proposal right, and that he realised when it was crunch time that he didn't need a speech, just an honest expression of what he wanted. Initially I was wondering if doing such a public proposal was really Lorne, but thinking about it, and given how public their first appearance as a couple was on Atlantis, it seems fitting that the beginning of their happily ever after should also be public. Atlantis is a family and in some respect closer than a lot of blood family ... they were amongst friends who care for them.

The little glimpse of their honeymoon was sweet - linking it back to their first vacation together and how Jennifer chased him across the country was a nice place to finish. Great story!

loved the proposal..sweet..and the one year later bit...nice to see it all worked out for them...

thanks for sharing

hugs

Lovely addition to the story. My favourite part was the proposal though - especially when McKay interrupted and prolonged it.