| Reviews for Chill |
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McKenzieTheWriter chapter 1 . 3/5/2016 loke x gray *sigh* not too many people ship this, it makes me sad! i love this ship! |
Hater88 chapter 1 . 2/14/2016 Great now I'm horny |
The Purple Ouroboros chapter 1 . 3/26/2015 That was really good. The only thing I would advise you on is to add a little more about the sensations, the pleasure that each character is feeling. (Excuse me for my fangirl moment.) That was so friggin HOT! |
DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 1 . 2/18/2013 Really really good for your first lemon. You have a dirty mind, haha :) Even though I'm the one complimenting you on your lemon xD Any chances for a sequel? This couple just doesn't have enough love. I never stopped wondering how Gray got Loke to be his partner in the S class exams when they didn't seem to be , quote Lucy." all buddy-buddy together" before. Romantical stuff must have been involved xP Please write more! |
wilmteri chapter 1 . 11/12/2012 this was COOOL! xD when their roles changed i had a small shock but it turned to be kind of good... Kidding kidding...IT WAS AMAZING! Really! :-))) |
yukinome23 chapter 1 . 10/12/2012 veryyyyyyyy hotttttttttt! |
Lucifer98 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012 That was totally hot xD! |
asdfghjkl-0-0-0-0 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012 Pretty good for your first lemon! Completely opposite if what they wanted, a rest... |
TakeshiAndTsuna'sLove chapter 1 . 1/26/2012 It's good for the firts lemon :3 |
fujoshii92 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011 that was hot! i wish there were more fanfic about this couple~~ |
Wild Rhov chapter 1 . 8/4/2011 Considering I normally read these two being all aggressive at each other over Lucy (blah!) I love them two the best. hmm, perhaps I could quit the One Piece ZoSan fics and come up with some GraLo (LoGray?) |
Yusuke kun chapter 1 . 7/21/2011 please makes some more! i really like this pairing! but there are only three fanfic for the pairing and only two of them is in English! of course are both written by you! XD so please write more! |
Aushi chapter 1 . 6/12/2011 For your first Lemon i have to say that it was an 8 out of 10 good job. XD |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2011 cool i like this one i got relly horny |
SoulBook chapter 1 . 4/27/2011 awesome... i hope for more fanfictions about this pairing :) |