Reviews for Chill
McKenzieTheWriter chapter 1 . 3/5/2016
loke x gray *sigh* not too many people ship this, it makes me sad! i love this ship!
Hater88 chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
Great now I'm horny
The Purple Ouroboros chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
That was really good. The only thing I would advise you on is to add a little more about the sensations, the pleasure that each character is feeling.

(Excuse me for my fangirl moment.)

That was so friggin HOT!
DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Really really good for your first lemon. You have a dirty mind, haha :) Even though I'm the one complimenting you on your lemon xD
Any chances for a sequel? This couple just doesn't have enough love. I never stopped wondering how Gray got Loke to be his partner in the S class exams when they didn't seem to be , quote Lucy." all buddy-buddy together" before. Romantical stuff must have been involved xP
Please write more!
wilmteri chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
this was COOOL! xD when their roles changed i had a small shock but it turned to be kind of good... Kidding kidding...IT WAS AMAZING! Really! :-)))
yukinome23 chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
veryyyyyyyy hotttttttttt!
Lucifer98 chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
That was totally hot xD!
asdfghjkl-0-0-0-0 chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Pretty good for your first lemon! Completely opposite if what they wanted, a rest...
TakeshiAndTsuna'sLove chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
It's good for the firts lemon :3
fujoshii92 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
that was hot! i wish there were more fanfic about this couple~~
Wild Rhov chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Considering I normally read these two being all aggressive at each other over Lucy (blah!) I love them two the best. hmm, perhaps I could quit the One Piece ZoSan fics and come up with some GraLo (LoGray?)
Yusuke kun chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
please makes some more! i really like this pairing! but there are only three fanfic for the pairing and only two of them is in English! of course are both written by you! XD so please write more!
Aushi chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
For your first Lemon i have to say that it was an 8 out of 10 good job. XD
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
cool i like this one i got relly horny
SoulBook chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
awesome...

i hope for more fanfictions about this pairing :)
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