| Reviews for sinking like sand |
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Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 11/14/2017 Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read |
chokulit chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 Even if they're canon now, this was still lovely to read, especially since we didn't see much of their romance in the last season. Loved these lines: There is no urgency as he takes in the sight of her, and when her eyes flutter open, wider and brighter than he's ever seen before, he realizes that she has always been the answer. Even before he knew there was a question left to ask. |
stxrdusty chapter 1 . 11/27/2012 So cute! I loved these! :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 wow, wow thats is some hot kisses |
Arianna Elizabeth Jackson chapter 1 . 9/23/2011 so many of versions of the same story...al written amazingly :) |
septemberly chapter 1 . 5/5/2011 It all was really beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. My personal favorites were part 1, 3 and 4. Keep up the good work, I adore your fan fictions 3 |
Dubbers chapter 1 . 12/21/2010 Brilliant - loved it! |
Afterglow04 chapter 1 . 11/17/2010 i. was HOT. And that's really all I have to say on the matter. Wow. ii. I instantly knew/suspected it was Minelli. But it still broke my heart. Minelliiiiiii. iii. I'm SO glad you had her enjoy the holidays. I don't know why, but I've always thought of her actually being a Christmassy person :p And mistletoe! Very cute, really loved their banter. And the final line of this part! heeee. I'd give money for those pictures. iv. was hauntingly beautiful. This may actually be my favourite. If I were ever capable of choosing one. v. Oh my. The poetic way in which you described the change in their relationship was perfect, this was so very well written. Needless to say, I loved this. It's what I will always need, more fic aimed at the hopelessly romantic please! :p Because I will happily admit I'm part of that group, sigh. These two. They break my heart, really. Very much enjoyed reading this, thanks for giving up on your original idea (although that might also have been brilliant) and going with this instead. Heeee. - Cathy x |
phoenixmagic1 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010 this is a wonderfully written story, I liked the angst between them up in the attic, great job :) |
erica83ca chapter 1 . 11/15/2010 A kissing scenario fic - well that's just awesome my friend! I don't think I can choose a favourite. Sigh... I guess if I had to choose it would be v but only because it is endgame so it seems more likely (fingers crossed) :-) i and iii were very entertaining. ii was so sweet - if Minelli had to... you know... walk towards the light, I'm glad it was for such a wonderful cause ;-) |
sparkky chapter 1 . 11/15/2010 Oh, this was just lovely! I'm in the middle of exams at the moment, but I've read this a few times - the perfect quick escape to make me sigh and forget the stress. Well played! |
Anna chapter 1 . 11/13/2010 :) I really enjoyed this! |
Aquila1 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010 Nicely done, as always. It felt very true to the characters and I think your assessment of their relationship is spot-on. A really lovely read. |
watchyouwalk chapter 1 . 11/11/2010 You paint the most vivid word pictures, I swear. Lovely. Part one made me squeal, and I was totally giggling my butt off at part three. Now please excuse me while I go float on a Jello cloud... |
Alamo Girl chapter 1 . 11/11/2010 DAW! I love this. i is just.. YUM. I do love a good against-the-wall kiss. And I absolutely adore the image of Jane "slumping back against the wall. Still hungry. Just... YUM! Minelli! GAH! I'm going to go cry now. Mistletoe was a given. And I LOVE the last one. The slow progression to the "ah ha" moment for Jane's feelings is always a favorite of mine. Brilliant work, as always! |