Reviews for Broken Pieces
chocolate1 chapter 16 . 11/14/2012
Here comes Willie again. Why doesn't this guy give it a rest? Come On these two yearn for each other even when they're angry and mad at each other. You can put up road blocks of pain but these two will fight to keep each other going. - that's true love. I'm seeing signs of some maturity which is awesome.

I'm worried about Max attending school...is she?

I can't wait for some questions to be answered especially with Will the thorn :) I'm interested in Max's session with Lisa. Her and Terry reuniting for real and making it all work out. Terry finding out about Willie and dealing with the problem. And a little Bruce Wayne on the side :)
chocolate1 chapter 15 . 11/14/2012
:( They are both crushed. Thanks a lot Lisa but the question needed to be asked and he gave a guy answer but when she pushed those words just came out differently to me. I would break it off too. Their love is so young that I expected it to go down like this - the hurt going back and forth especially with all Max is experiencing. Love is all consuming at one point but it still needs to grown and mature. It feels like a game between these two at times - breaking up and getting back together. I sure hope it comes to a point when they can laugh off their first fight but it aint going to be now when hearts are so bruised.
chocolate1 chapter 14 . 11/14/2012
Oh No! Terry had to say that one word. I recall asking a guy that same question and his answer didn't satisfy me either :)

I don't know if I'm comfortable with Dr. Lovely allowing Bruce to listen in on her session with Max especially after she promised to keep it between them. Ah well what can be done bc he already listened but I'm happy he won't allow Terry to view it.

Willie is not only a thorn for Terry and Max he's also a thorn in my side popping up at the wrong time :)

Brucie is another one that needs his own counselling and the doctor seems to be back in session if he only allows it to go there :) but he won't of course.
chocolate1 chapter 12 . 11/14/2012
Terry is probing and Max is avoiding. Max should know that he won't let it go bc he's in bat mode yet I know its still hard for her to fess up about something so simple bc she still has a lingering fear about their relationship. Max seems to be there and still not there, well at least her appetite is returning and other than avoiding Terry's question, they seem to be engaging in regular Terry/Max conversations mixed in with I love yous...awww.
It's still a wait and see for Max and I also wonder what she will reveal to Lisa Lovely.
chocolate1 chapter 10 . 11/13/2012
Yeah you left me wandering unto the next chapter :D

Willie what you don't understand that the love between Terr and Max is way deeper than a pink BMW. If she wants it, he'll get it but she needs from him right now is L.O.V.E. Just when things are going great a crazy loon has to throw a wrench in the plumbing. I hope this guy doesn't get too far and even if he does Terry gets an opportunity to punch out his lights - Hands off my fiancee.
chocolate1 chapter 8 . 11/13/2012
Why would you believe I would be happy to see Willy return in the next chapter even though I was thinking where the heck he was :)

Finally Max is seeing, understanding and accepting that Terry loves her with all his heart. My answer would be the same as Max if I was asked that same question - I wouldn't want to lose him and never see him again. Yeah Bruce is rubbing off on Terry bc the old Terry wouldn't have been so patient with Max at all. He would have allowed his anger to overshadow his true purpose of wanting to help Max. I believe the words he said really help Max to accept his love, his proposal and seeing the psychiatrist.
chocolate1 chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
Bruce having insight on the female species who would've have thunk it. I wonder what the younger Bruce would have thought about that. :)

It so heartbreaking to see Max continously hurting herself to the point of coming close to dying just bc of fearing the love of her best friend. She knows she loves him with all her heart but can't seem to distance herself from that fear. If he loves her, he'll continue to stand by her side, love her and see her through this hard struggle.
chocolate1 chapter 6 . 11/13/2012
OH MY MY MY! MAX! What's happened to her that makes her want to hurt herself so much and throw away her happiness? It has to be more than her parents poor treatment. It goes way deeper. Sometimes you can't see a person's love bc the hurt always takes over. Terry sees her as beautiful, someone that he loves and cares so much about but she won't until she gets some serious help.

On a lighter note - Brucie strikes again...he just springs his knowledge about their virginity on Terry without a second thought. I can see the other explanation about the ring but how in the world did he know that?
chocolate1 chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
Max's doubts almost got the better of her but Terry made sure he had the last say. YAY! Their declaration of love awesome! And that marriage proposal excellent! I do fear Max's old doubts coming back to bite them in the ass. When Terry isn't around, these doubts seem to come up and carry Max away form that feeling and acceptance of Terry's love. Sometimes its heartbreaking to read her struggles but you go on bc you know Terry is willing to fight for their love.
chocolate1 chapter 4 . 11/12/2012
I can fall in love with a guy like Terry bc his is so freaking adorable with all the things he does for Max. Sometimes I hate when she brings up the promise but I'm happy when she just lets go and makes things happen. I just enjoyed when they were singing and Max was going with the flow even though her old doubts were creeping in. As for this Willy guy sounds like he's working for somebody and yet his twisted mind is having feelings for Max too. Soon Terry's mind will be divided.
chocolate1 chapter 3 . 11/12/2012
Sometimes its nice to have neighbors who care (don't worry I don't consider her nosy :)

Always Your Terry, Always My Max - my heart flutters and then he finally kissed her silencing her doubts for a brief time. I should have known all her doubts would creep back in again. Still wondering about this promise and what it has to do with their relationship. And if Max doesn't have enough problems here comes this creep to add his two cents their breakup now Terry is in danger. Their love is becoming more dangerous by the moment.
chocolate1 chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
What in the world is this promise that Max is talking about? She's literally trying to kill herself not to think about Terry which is so sad. I guess she just feels that she's not worthy of love and doesn't want to be heartbroken if she puts herself out there to Terr and he rejects her. While on the other hand Terry is trying to get her to understand his feelings by beating around the bush. Earth to Terry - Max aint psychic ( I know men like to say this about women) If a guy was my best friend, the words would have to leave his mouth to make me believe as well. At a certain point I can't fault Max for her jumbled thoughts about Terry.

On a lighter note - it's called gas :D What's up with that explanation Brucie. Can't you see your son has a connection with the woman he loves.
Secondly Terry - you're crazy old man I can't afford that - Hello! Aren't you Brucie's kid? Come On Terr :)
chocolate1 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
It's so weird how Max can pull of the friendship funstuff with Terry during their awake moments but cries herself to sleep feeling that she can never tell him the truth about her love for him. What's going on with Terry? You would believe he would make the first move but it seems there's something about Max that holds him back from saying those three little words. Sometimes these two want to make you smack them upside the head especially when we know that they love each other.

By the way Terry's promise ring eye was so schway. For a guy to be so devoted to their friendship after all these years says a lot especially someone who can barely make it to class and needs her help studying. He thinks more of her than anyone else.
RyokoMist chapter 16 . 5/30/2011
oh my this was real gud. i especially loved the beginning! i was like, OH SNAP DEEP MOMENT! lol. u had a couple of spelling and gramatical errors, but i didnt really pay attention. oh boy, i wonder wat Willy has in store for my fav BB couple! this is getn good, i cant wait for the next chapter! keep it up bestie. i guess im next huh? lol
VOIDVOID chapter 16 . 5/30/2011
The tragedy of Terry and Maxine! I love this story so. Dang Bestie the wait was DEFINETELY worth it you are seriously one of the best writers on fan fic! love it so terry is such a swettie after max has hurt him numerous times. You just have a lot of hope 4 them until one of them does something... That willie watt he is like tybalt he so needs to leave them alone. He is justjealous of Terry's goog looks. Cursed cliffhanger willie go back to your corner!

Favepart:Bruce got swag! enough said!

update soon :D

ur bestie ~Gleek2beat
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