Adorable story! I flipping loved it! 3

I was about ready to kill Ike for leaving Marth so many times. Lol your story did things to me o.e sorry Ike..kills- nuu I can't kill him. c: Somehow revives him-

Omg... PLEASE make a another chapter or story that is continuing this one!

Aww! your story was soooo cute! It made me squeal like some rabid fangirl. Thank you for writing this :) I loved it.

Nice ending

I really liked this, nice job

I like it! It's very thrilling,and interesting to read!

Great story c:

That was a great story. I wish it didn't end. It was really emostional and the two character's perspectives were a good way for this story. Marth is so cute! Great way to end it too. I thought Ike would leave Marth! That wasgood suspence. Awsome Fanfiction! :D

that was sniff..beautiful. i loved it

It shows a lot of initiative that your first fanfic was a story this long, but this should probably go in the SSB section. With SSB 'fics, you have a lot more flexibility, but here in the Fire Emblem section I'd expect the story to suit the mood or the setting of a Fire Emblem game, and this Altea doesn't feel *at all* like the one in the games. The plot doesn't match at all with the way the wars went down in Marth's games, either- Marth wasn't exiled because he was defeated and sent off in disgrace, he was in exile because he and his loyal knights escaped from Altea when Marth was too young to fight, and he had to wait a couple of years before he was ready to launch a rebellion. Also, you have the characters swearing by God and Jesus when Marth's world has many gods (nature gods) and Ike's world religion involves Goddesses. It's more like your own original story with a few Fire Emblem characters than it is a Fire Emblem fanfic.

Also, it's very confusing the way you jump from Marth's POV to Ike's POV without warning.

for a first story this is really good i should kno cuz i tried writting many storys and they never work out XD anywayz i think you should label when u change from Marths p.o.v. to Ikes p.o.v. over all its an awsome story ~*MARTHxIKE4EVER*~