It's good. Like the situation in Seireitei, but without the complications. It's about the emotions.

Ohmygod I hate you! I need more, you can't just leave me hanging! -sobs-

Anyways, great story, well written. Hope you continue to post!

Not confusing

good writing style

That was NOT an end:

CONTINUE

xoxo

Cherry )

Complicated relationship. What I love most about ur characters is how understanding they are about each other. They know their flaws and how some things dont need to be said out loud.

But is he avoiding her because... what? He's in the Mafia!

I was going to write something really pretentious about "quiet strength" and that you lured me in "like a spider waiting for the fly" and that jazz, but this story deserves more than pretentiousness.

I really like the way you portray Rangiku, Gin and Izuru, you're really catching on to their emotions and still leave a lot of thinking for the reader.

In one way I want you to continue writing so that I can find out what more you can delve from this pairing, but in another way it's perfect the way it is. Thank you for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it.

it was like reading a diary. rangiku lost between asking gin to stay or just letting him come and go as he pleases.. very sad..

Wow I love this story, please continue

You really should write more! It'd be awesome if you finished it next chapter!

this is really good! i would love it if you wrote more! i would definantly read it

I liked it, it wasn't confusing. I like how it represented their relationship and the ending is open. I think their relationship will continue as is until something more drastic changes (maybe a job gone wrong or rangiku finding out the truth). I'm assuming kira doesn't work for the mob (or if he does, he's more local). I really can't see him doing that kind of work.

I for one really like the direction it's taking!

Oh snap, Gin is in the mafia! I just hope every thing works out all right; I've seen the God Father so I know how these things work. ) I'll give you a chocolate-chip cookie if you continue! _

You're a really good writer. I haven read such a great GinRan fic in a while! :) You really did capture the depth of their emotions.

I loved this! I'm so glad you added Gin's POV to this story, because it was lovely to get both sides of their relationship and understand Gin's personality and his actions a little bit more. I think you characterised him perfectly. I like the idea that he enjoys teasing people but he never means to make them cry, also that he enjoys both effects he has on people, creeping them out included. It's very Gin, and Gin is always fun to read. Amazingly you managed to get the same atmosphere into his perspective too. So thanks!

Also incidentally loved the Soi Fon one-liner :D