Hey, that's a nice story ! I'd love to see it in an actual treehouse of horrors !

Wow. I'm pretty sure this is EXACTLY how the episode would've gone if it was one. Except I think the writer's would've added more references, but it was still great!

Nice, a couple of plot holes though, up until confronting Bart Lisa had no idea who he killed (only Martin Prince saw the note) so how could she have had the fake she showed bart. You need to explain this (i.e. have lisa say she knew about the note before hand.

This should totally be a segement in the Treehouse of Horror series

No está mal.
Tengo una duda. En este fic, ¿Bart y Lisa no eran hermanos?
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Not bad.
I have a doubt. In this fic, ¿Bart and Lisa were not siblings?

Good job. Perhaps the first decent Treehouse of Horror fanfic I've ever read.

This would have been a rather good idea, if it hadn't alreday been done officially in a Simpsons comic... I also think you could have done a lot more with it, like giving the Death Note to a less predictible character. (ie. Sideshow Bob)

The role of L couldn't have been filled by anyone but Lisa, so you made a good decision there.

Despite the lack of decription, length and upredictability, i'd say it was a valiant effort.

Keep on trying!

~ Lawli.

Woah.

Very Treehouse of Horror-ish. Very good... Almost TOO good... *Looks around shiftily*

lol! That was crazy fun! Loved the ending!

WOW this is very good. I'm very surprised. Who would knew the Shinigami is Krusty. LOOOOL!

I also like the part when everyone cheers despite Mr. Burn's death. And also Chief Wiggum's antics...

I laughed my way though the whole story. XD. This is brilliant. If only this story could be longer. But still it's superb!

Very nice. A good example of fan fiction. Could have been a lot longer though.

Liked the Inuyasha reference at the end - are you going to write that one too?

A decent read, if a little too short. It feels like you could have done much more with the characters and situations but I got some good laughs and I like how naturally the role of L is filled if Bart has a Killing Book. Krusty as Ryyuk was great too but like I said I would have liked to see a lot more done with it, like seeing Bart finally put an end to Sideshow Bob once and for all.