| Reviews for 1 Brothers in Arms |
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TFAmpersand chapter 2 . 4/12/2012 Liked the small joke Sesshoumaru cracked at the beginning of the chapter. I am wondering though; Inuyasha said "everyone" was gone, but I was quite certain that most of his friends had survived the ordeal with Naraku. I just thought that perhaps Inuyasha might have found solace in their company while Kagome was gone for those three years, but perhaps not... I'm not sure whether or not you will be revealing everyone else's whereabouts in the next few chapters, but I'm still enjoying the story. I'll be reviewing the next chapter soon. -EA |
TFAmpersand chapter 1 . 4/9/2012 Just found this story, and I'm really liking it after only the first chapter. I too wanted there to be more relationship development between the brothers, especially when The Final Act was so intent upon keeping them enemies. I thought the manga development was a lot better, but still not quite what I myself had in mind. One thing that is a mere personal qualm, but I thought worth mentioning: you have Rin referring to Kaede and Inuyasha with the suffix "san" which would be more appropriate if she thought them only slightly above her in a level of respect. She usually refers to just about everyone else as a "sama" much like she does Sesshoumaru, so I was a little bit thrown by that. Otherwise, great story, I'm adding it to my favorites, and I hope to read more of it soon. -EA |
pumpkinpi chapter 42 . 6/20/2011 Everything started off a little rough at first at the princess family home, but Sesshoumaru actually enjoyed at least part of the festivities. A little to much for his Lady liking. The last thing she wanted was a drunk daiyoukai on her hands especially since her father was livid by the way her and Sesshoumaru got together. The Lady also got to bear witness to some of Sesshoumaru old habits, namely beating Jaken senseless for doing something that's well...Jaken. Hehehe, but he couldn't get rid of the imp, after all he is very loyal and keeps him leveled so he won't get too high and mighty by questioning him! Rin is elated to have the Lady back at the castle and to see Sesshoumaru actually happy for once! And I believe Sesshoumaru is having a go at the match maker role, by hooking Inuyasha up with a certain former occupant of the castle! Great stuff look foward to more! |
Jaylonni Love chapter 42 . 6/19/2011 To every action there is a repercussion. That's a lesson everyone learns the hard way. |
Jaylonni Love chapter 41 . 6/18/2011 I thought that the lemon was good - though it was tame. We can't expect for them to go rabid the first time. I really liked it. |
pumpkinpi chapter 41 . 6/17/2011 Yay they finally end up together but what of the consequences if any for their actions? I would really like to know what happens to the couple as well as Inuyasha and the gang in a sequal! Great chapter look forward to more! |
Shay Candy chapter 41 . 6/17/2011 That was so sweet. Not bad on the lemon. |
The Jingo chapter 41 . 6/17/2011 A quick writer as well I see. Since this one ends soon, have you an idea about future fics you're going to write? |
Kimihara chapter 41 . 6/16/2011 Awww finally. |
The Jingo chapter 40 . 6/14/2011 Very impressive. I'm not a real fan of fluffy stories, but this is a good one. |
Shay Candy chapter 40 . 6/13/2011 So he goes to talk to her, tells her how he feels, she tells him how she feels, he decides to tell her father, but she stops him. Hmmm, I wonder what will happen next. Please continue, I'm really enjoying this story. |
Jaylonni Love chapter 40 . 6/12/2011 He said it, he finally said it! It's about time. But now I want to know why Akatsuki objected to him telling her father. I kind of have an idea but I want to be certain. |
pumpkinpi chapter 40 . 6/12/2011 Good News they finally confessed their love to each other! Bad news a big obstacle blocks their path to happiness, namely youkai laws! Great stuff look forward to more! |
Kimihara chapter 39 . 6/12/2011 Finally InuYasha and Rin were able to get through to Sesshomaru. He finally realizes that he does care for the hidenka but he also knows that he may be too late to tell her how he really feels. We'll have to wait and see how this plays out. |
pumpkinpi chapter 39 . 6/11/2011 Yay! Rin and Inuyasha finally was able to help Sesshoumaru figure out what those confusing feelings are! Now all he has to do is figure out a way to tell the princess. He has always been blunt when he had something he wanted to say, especially when he has something cruel to say! Now if he could only use that seem trait of his personality to get his point across to the princess. If only he could be so straightforward and confess his love to her. Rin and Inuyasha are a lot smarter than some may think, they should give each other a high five for a job well done:-) Great stuff, look forward to more! |