KYAAAAAAA! It's so short but it's soooooooo cheesy! - which I really like.. ;)

I can imagine Kyohei saying that to Sunako... lol :))

Wish you can write longer stories like this one.. :D

It's so cute! I love it!

Cute.

aww! Short and sweet. :) The way you wrote this reminds me of free-verse poetry. I really loved it!

it was a short one but i loved it! _ hope you will make more of this with more than one chapter. good luck and keep up the good work! )

Nice one! :D (thumps up)

Good job. Short, but sweet. I would like to see a longer version of this, but it is good none the less. GO SUNAKO AND KYOUHEI! X3

nicely written but its too short, why not make a longer fanfics in the future