Awesome story. It had great pacing and I liked how it went to so many places emotionally throughout which I found very satisfying. I could see things playing out like this. Writing that kind of realism can be tricky so I'm really impressed.

Awe. This was just the right about of motivation to jump start their relationship ;)

The pause you wrote between them when everything was getting really hot and heavy really showed just how much this meant to him.

Thanks for the read ]

Great fun to read. I hesitated openning it thinking Zane died since I didn't want something sad but I'm so glad I took a chance.

Yeah I'm pretty enraptured with this one-shot. Read it like three times. I like the "Are you getting serious on me now Josefina" turn around. Very nice.