| Reviews for Don't make me say I Love You |
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  Guest chapter 4 . 5/2 This is getting very melodramatic. Shame. I thought it would be fun. |
 moricette chapter 9 . 12/10/2019 Pourquoi ne pas finir cette histoire? C'est dommage... |
| ale chapter 9 . 9/29/2019 Me gustaba bastante la historia... |
| NotACursedChild chapter 4 . 6/3/2019 Love this new Jane, but hate the way her family is treating her |
| AnaBookWorm chapter 8 . 2/17/2018 Love the story! |
| my-spirit-animal-is-the-impala chapter 9 . 5/31/2017 Omg fam, please keep writing! You may not be a idealistic 15 year old with a crush on your geography teacher but I AM! Please, finish this for me! |
| Rea2017 chapter 9 . 2/19/2017 Great story! I hope you don't stop this story because so far it is really good. Please update if you can. |
| London201516 chapter 9 . 10/18/2016 Please update? |
| Kcm7 chapter 9 . 4/20/2016 I hope you continue. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/5/2016 Please continue the story it was getting really interesting ... Please |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/4/2016 Please continue your story! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/23/2015 I love your story! Its really good! Are u writing this on a different site? Cause it says u havent updated in 2 almost 3 years. The last chapter was such a cliff hanger! |
| Lisa Cooper chapter 7 . 7/21/2015 It was sweet how Will Darcy was trying to help Elizabeth over come fears. It was also sweet how she is relaxing a bit with him. I liked how you are showing their relationship developing. |
| InARealPickle chapter 2 . 3/9/2015 Does a school of Economics even offer a degree in English Lit? oO |
| Amy of the Green Gables chapter 9 . 3/8/2015 Hello! I really liked your story so far. I'll agree it is not perfect, there are some loopholes, but there is a good plot going on, and a lot of paths you can take fron there. Maybe you would feel better about it if you diffused a little the focus fron Darcy and Elizabeth. Like, putting a little more of effort in talking about the other characters, to make it more real. Put a little of background story, you know? I know it is usually hard enough to write an entire plot without adding the trouble of thinking about whatever else the rest of the other characters are up to, but it usually actually helps the story. I'm not saying you haven't done that, there are other characters appearing, but it could use a little more. Mike is always there, but what about Jane? Lizzy hasn't talked to her since moving out. And what about Darcy work, his sister, his friends? In any case, I don't know if this was the revised version or not, but if you're up to finish this I'm definitely up to reading it. Best wishes, Amy |
