Writing first person views isn't easy, but this is great. Keep it up!

I actually came up with two ideas you could do when you jump back into this: Ignitus' POV of the scene in the Belt of Fire and Spyro's POV of the scene before the final battle before Melafor.

I think they're great ideas and I hope you think so too.

I have two ideas...

one is The Chronicler's view when he meets Spyro in the Celestial Caves

The other is what was going through Cynders head when she realised Spyro DID come for her in the

Well of Souls

DETAILED! Detailed detailed detailed!

And that's what matters right?

Any boring story could be turned entertaining by DETAILS!

But this story wasn't boring in the first place anyway!

This was written wonderfully. You got Spyro right on the dot. And don't be so critical of yourself. You did great.

Woo, a new chapter! YAY! Very good, very descriptive, very...Cynder...y. You get the point. XD

Sorry. I thought I reviewed...but I didn't XD

Anyway, good chapter as always. Keep it up!

Hello, it's ScarletOHare from deviantART. :)

I did read this story before and I thought I'd reviewed it. It's short and sweet; keep it up.

Woooo! Yay! You know, write a real book sometime. A real book. You'll be going places. Seriously, with all the details you put into these, catching my very short attention span, you'll be a millionaire!

As for the story itself, well done! Nobody could do Ignitus' point of view better, so far. Keep it up! :)

Awewsome chapter, liked the in-depth of Ignitus's thoughts.

Very good addition, and it's nice that you clear specified the character's thoughts.

YAY!

Poor Cynder...*sigh* Well, very good chapter, quite deep and emotional.

I like it! Once again Cynder's emotions are show trough here, brilliant work. It's very obvious that Cynder's being torn apart by what she's done, and it made me feel truly sorry for her.

When you make someone feel sorry for a video game character, you've succeded as a writer. Congratulations.

1 more word, and you've have 1000.

Doing both chappies at once here.

First one was a well-done scene, with Cynder's thoughts with the dialogue mixed perfectly. And the horror of what had happened really shows through. Great writing.

Second one was also pretty good. I like how you start off in the middle of the scene. Good writing!

Yay!

Anyway, I liked this chapter, it really put some detail into how Spyro might have felt.

Nice little scenes here. I love Spyro and Cynder, especially when they were little.