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Short and sweet. I liked it. A LOT. You added a good amount of detail for a oneshot. I also liked how you put in that Fox liked Krystal for more than just physical desire and truly had sincere love for her. I also liked how you worked the aftermath of the Aparoid invasion into the plot.

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This is my user name. didnt feel like logging in. anyway good job

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nice one whitefur, good on ya for a quicky, though if you plan to elongate this one, id probobly put in a date, then maybe some more stuff just to make it intresting, im no novalist, but you certainly have a talent for this

I have nothing other to say than this is cute

Nice addition to your stories Whitefur. Very subtle I liked it. Go Whitefur go!

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Not too bad of a story, however; the story seems to flash forwards at such a quick pace and needs to be stretched further in order to create a proper scenario and setting for the story to be more "capturing".

This could be a good one if set out was longer,

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