This is honestly one of the best fanfics I've ever read, I don't think I've ever spent 4 hours reading 1 fanfic because I couldn't put it down. Thank you for writing this master piece, even though I don't think Aang or Katara would ever break up

ur a great writer but I couldn't let u ruin my image of kataang

I'll be real. Katara deserves to suffer. She held back too long. Of course you're gonna get rejected when you say your feelings too late! Of course, that's probably because I'm a twisted biased freak, but... y'know what I mean.

One thing I'm gonna say. You're making it seem like Katara doesn't truly love Aang... unless of course that's what you were aiming for. I like this story though.

Good story very emotional.

This was simply amazing

Very good...thanks.

"LIKE"

Kya is the middle child, Bumi is The firstborn

This absolutely insane. The writing is so detailed, so brilliantly planned out. You have left me speechless.

Awesome

Awesome!

This story is beautifully written and portrayed. Felt lots of chills during the epic moments. Really got into the story. I'm glad you completed this story and ended it perfectly. You're a great writer!

I intend to give you a long review because I believe this story deserves it – and you as an author deserve it too.
First of all, I have to tell you that I liked the story. You made me want to read more and more of it, especially after Aang and Katara's special night in Ba Sing Se. (And I have to admit that the sex scene between them was one of the best written sex scenes I've ever read – congrats on that, it was detailed yet tasteful. Beautiful, actually).
The first half of the story gave me doubts if I was going to like it much, probably because your writing style didn't seem mature enough yet – in the first half there were way too many superfluous details like longish shopping sprees with giggly girls, descriptions of attires and interior design - I must admit these stuff I usually just skipped, they hold no interest for me (I guess I'm just too old for things like that that usually are interesting for teen readers and teen readers only). But in the second half there were less superfluous details like these and the story began to catch my attention.
At first I thought that the altercation between Aang and Katara that led them to break up was just childish and the whole story would turn out like that. But as the plot developed I came to realise that it was not childish, it was getting more and more serious which I truly liked. I especially liked the fact that you didn't completely sugar-coat the ending, you put in a few pages showing true human nature – you showed us how spiteful and nasty people could be. It was enough for Aang to make one wrong step and the whole world started to hate him. This was a nice touch. A necessary touch that made sure the ending wouldn't be all too pink.
I had a little problem with names you used for various characters - “the Fire Nation beauty”, “the ebony beauty”, “the waterbender who hailed from the Southern Water Tribe”, etc. These were okay a couple of times but you simply overused them. Most of the time it's easier to just call them Onji and Katara. Or the “girl”. So simple.
My favourite scene – besides the already mentioned Kataang sex scene – was the scene in which Aang told Onji that her meddling had sent him into Katara's arms and helped him fulfil his duty. I felt like punching the air when I read that. Very neat.
All in all this was a good story with some minor problems that you will - I am sure – get rid of as you get more writing practice. Good luck with writing, you have a talent! :)

This is nothing short of a masterpiece. Absolutely amazing.