Excellent story, I like how it was Lily that brought on the changes. Though she does sound like a handful! thank you for writing this.

Oh my gosh...this is amazing. I love how you wrote Dudley and Lily's conversation so believably and the fusion with Charlie and the Chocolate Factory made me laugh. This is absolutely brilliant, I want to see more of Dudley and Lily Luna's conversations as Lily Luna grows up...

This was unbelievably sweet. And I mean that in a good way! I love that Dudley recognized his part in Harry's terrible childhood, and him trying to make ammends in adulthood. Such a nice thought.

Good chap {story}

That was sweet. I really liked it. I especially like your characterizations. You gave Dudley enough background info to backup his new personality, without warping him into a completely different person. And Luna, I love your expansion on her as well. There was never much character info of the children in the Epilogue of the 7th book to begin with so in a sense they're always going to be OOC in fanfics since no one truly knows their character. But your characterization of Luna was wonderful. I absolutely love the childish innocence you gave her while at the same time mixing in that unexpected wisdom she is claimed to have. Only thing I didn't quite get from your story was the Willy Wonka Chocolate Factory thing. I didn't quite get how it existed in the muggle world or how Dudley works there, or anything really. I really think there's something I'm missing on that part. An explanation would be nice. But overall a wonderful read. Please do keep writing, you certainly have the talent for it.

Well presented. Very convincing. And very in-character as well. I love the character development, even if it was fleeting.

aw! :D Lil' Lily Luna's so cute! (and I love her name too!)

I love the redemption thing and everything down pat. I don't blame everyone for disliking Dudley but you'd think after the Great War they'd know better than to hold grudges. Great fic!

very beautifully well written & a job well done, something that was unexpected, i was assuming this was gonna an incest fic, but i'm glad it's not (it would probably sacr me for life)