Definitively one of the best code lyoko there is and that you have, tough the ending was kinda sad, I mean, it was a happy sad ending, nothing really happened and they continued with their lives normally, I hate the ending but love it, like that time at the theater watching Avengers:Infinity war ending.

The scene at the factory was kinda emotional, I get the feeling I once saw/read/heard something with a situation like that but no idea where. Even then, following the rules we’ve seen in this story that creates a strange time loop, but if the others are continuing their lives normally, then maybe by some strange events this time loop separates itself and all those events from normal time, looping so hard that destroys itself and then no longer affects the timeline? No idea.

Still, good job, going to be browsing the archive looking for a CL story that has more of the 4th season, with the team doing missions in the real life with their Lyoko forms.

The series leaved me wanting for more when I saw the army of robots XANA had in real life. Kinda expected them to fight those in zones with people, making people go “Oh, alien invasion! Weird guys in spandex fighting evil alien robots!” or “WTF are a teenage spandex bois doing in our space station” or maybe “Uh…boss, we have a teenage pink haired angel elf in the lab rom..” …so far no god luck, tons of almost copies of the series (only in txt form), bad OC, Mary sue and blablabla.

... ... no words can explean what happened to yumi... she was in her underwear... wow...

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This is definitely one of your best, but you shouldn't have ended it this way! You could have gone into a post apocalyptic fight against Xana! I mean come on! Aelita deleting herself? That is such a sad ending. You could do better. Just saying.

dude... amazing stroy. two things though... one ulrich should never date sissy, you anger me and second, that was a sad ending with no aielita, no yumixulrich, and they dont win. it should end with the same future in the story minus the xana take over. you're still an excellent writer

It was great until this ending.

Ok so first of all i am a Huge fan code lyoko and think your stories are great. Kind of sad ending though. Code lyoko for ever. :)

Well maybe you can do another story based off what happened at the end of season 4? I don't know but I am enjoying reading your code lyoko storys my personal favorite was the season 5 you wrote.

Interesting ending. Though, if what Aelita did resulted in her never being virtualized and never meeting Jeremy, then there would be no Aelita to go back to do so, thus creating an endless circle.

Any way, a Season 0 sounds pretty cool. :D

I agree with Omega. I think really liked the start of this chapter but in the end, I didn't care for it. I would have liked it better if you had continued the story past this where the timelines correct themselves and the Lyoko warriors find the data, or something along those lines. To be honest, I have not cared for the past 2 or 3 chapters. This is still a good story overall and I hope you plan on another season of Code Lyoko!

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Omega! No troll sounding here. Your opinion is a good one. I like that thought. If you liked the last ending better then go with that. If you liked the second ending better then go with that one. Like I said in the A/N I had done different endings for the past two episodes and couldn't decide what I should do. It was tough leaving it as it was and continued with the other last episode. I have no problem with critical reviews as long as they are well thought and spelled correctly, like yours.

Ok to be honest, I really didnt like this ending at all. This chapter really shouldnt have existed and you should have left it off at the ending of the last chapter. You wrote a good bitter sweet ending that basicly xana won but the warriors were still going to fight until the end but with this ending it basicly got rid of it and made little sense with how the story was playing itself out. I'm sorry if I sound like a stupid troll but I really didnt like this chapter and would never consider this to be anything more then an alternate ending.

Seriously? You ended it? Just when it was getting good too... :(

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