Reviews for Red Chain
big banks chapter 2 . 4/4/2011
This is great! hahahaa! xD Anyways, as I told you before, FINISH YOUR STORY! Sorry xD

Haha but overall, it's good.
Emo Princess Addie chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
You did a great job on this story so far! Oh, are you using my OC or not?
ChasingStarr chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
If you're still accepting oc's

Character Name: Alexandra Night

Nicknames- Lexi, Alex, Ali, Alex, and Andra (Mostly is Ali and Alex)

Age:17

Gender: Female

Personality: Alexandra has a tendency to have a mixed-up personality. For example she’s sometimes wild and stubborn often perking up for the smallest things and sticking up to what she believes in no matter what the argument is. But she’s also known to be clueless and has bad sense of direction. She’s basically clueless when it comes to Hoenn natives seeing as that she has never been there, and that her directions often get her lost or something far worse. She’s also known to be accident-prone often having problems fallowing everywhere she goes. Yet Alexandra is very nice and sympathetic and she deeply cares for her starter pokemon Tobi for she and the pokemon have done almost everything together since her adventure.

History: Alexandra was born in Blackthorn City and was raised by a family of dragon tamers, but unlike her family Alexandra never had a fondness with dragon pokemon but found most ground pokemon the cutest ones of them all. When she had reached the age of ten the girl had secretly ran away to Newbark town to receive Tobi her male Cyndaquil partner. Alexandra had a dream to enter contests but her pokemons never agreed to do something along those lines but somewhat agreed to use combinations that would help in battles. Alexandra had made many rivals and friend along the way as she challenged the Kanto and Johto League and she also traveled around the Sinnoh region but what is bad for her is that she’s never stepped in the Hoenn region often being very clueless when pokemon from that region are shown off in battles or out in the open.

Pokemon Battle Style: Alexandra seems to want to prove that pokemon can be graceful and beautiful even in a harsh pokemon battle. Her pokemon often are found using numerous combinations either with one and another or with her own. Her favorite way to battle is definitely double battle to where her creative imagination sparks in and her combinations seem to flow more.

Briefly describe their appearance, clothing and items:

Hair Color- Alexandra has long silky chestnut brown hair, which she braids into a side braid that often ends up resting on her left shoulder. She also has the habit of fashioning in a loose curly ponytail but nothing more.

Eye Color- Cobalt blue, her glasses seemed to magnify it even more then she wants too though.

Clothes: Her clothing style is what basically having a periwinkle short sleeves t-shirt that’s concealed by a white baggy jacket, she holds a brown satchel that slings over her shoulder while she wears light blue jeans, and white tennis shoes.

Would you like this character to enter a relationship with another?: Sure

Are you okay with this character or their Pokemon dying?: I guess you could, but If you killed off any of her pokemon could you at least spare Tobi

Fighting? If so, describe how they fight/weapon(s): Doesn’t enjoy the fact of violence, but when troubled the girl will use her hand in hand combat but she doesn’t dare to touch a weapon for special reasons.

Pokemon: ( you may have ONE fifth gen. Pokemon, but no more than that. :3 )

Tobi-Male-Typhlosion-Level 55- Tobi is over protective with his trainer and always stays outside of his pokeball to make sure his trainer is okay. But once he meets a friend of Alex, he’ll be a friendly pokemon but still never leaves the girls side. Moves: Eruption, Flamethrower, Focus Punch, and Shadow Claw (Nature: Brave)

Raiden-Male-Rhydon-Level- 46- Raiden is smug often boasting on how powerful he is for his strong nature. He’s mostly cunning and doesn’t enjoy when the girls of the party often take role of the group and try to be the savior. Moves: Surf, Body Slam, Horn Drill, and Earthquake (Nature: Sassy)

Kiba-Male-Jolteon-Level 46- Kiba is a strong battler he often likes to show off his amazing battle skills, and finds battling a game. No matter what happens the guy tends to always get back up just to finish the battle. He sometimes cold toward others but have a soft spot for Pandora. Moves: Shockwave, Thunder, Dig, and Iron Tail (Nature: Serious)

Pandora-Female-Vaporeon-Level 52- She’s the strongest female on the team, but what is funny is that the female mermaid pokemon doesn’t like resulting in violence or harming her opponent that hard. She’s often found freezing the pokemon in a block of ice or drenching them with water till they are unable to move. She’s also sympathetic and likes to look at the brighter side of things. She’s also Alexandra’s seeing-eye dog for how she can disappear in water. Moves: Aurora Beam, Wish, Blizzard, and Surf (Mood: Calm)

Mocha-Female-Milktank-Level-50- Mocha seems to be unbeatable at times for her rolling roll out attacks, after facing Whitney’s Milktank Alexandra decided to get one. Mocha seems to the feisty one and loves to play around with her fellow pokemon. She’s also the one who is found to straiten up both Tobi and Raiden when there are either getting to full of themselves or too protective. Moves: Rollout, Milk Drink, Seismic Toss, and Body Slam (Nature: Docile)

Luka-Female-Togekiss-Level 42- Luka is the newest member and probably the sweetest one of them all. Luka has the tendency to be the motherly type and make sure the team to okay before ever advancing. She also has a habit of scolding Raiden and Kiba for their natures and sometimes even Tobi when he is blaring with anger. But the young serenity pokemon has those kind of auras where it’ll make others calm at first glance. Moves: Metronome, Air Slash, Aura Sphere, and Sweet Kiss(Nature: Gentle)
Thegreatest777 chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
I hope there's still room for my OC

Character Name: Joseph Gold.

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Personality: Loud, stubborn, arrogant and has a hair trigger temper. However, under that, he is loyal, friendly, and thinks of others first. He hates being called short.

History: He lived in Goldenrod Town with his family. His family was always trying to force him to give up his dream of being a trainer, and when he was 11, he ran away to New Bark Town, where he recived his starter Cyndaquil. He got his other pokemon during his travels.

Appearence: 5'0, with short platinum blonde hair, and green eyes. He's slightly tanned, and weighs 105 pounds.

Clothing and items: Gold t-shirt, black shorts, white sneakers, and a gold baseball cap. Has a pair of black goggles he wears when travelling, but keeps them on his cap otherwise. He also carries daggers and throwing knives.

Relationship?: Sure.

Death?: If you need to, then it's fine.

Fighting: Fights by taking advangtage of the environment and his oppenent, as well as using his knives and daggers.

Pokemon:

1: Baku, Typhlosion, level 45, Firey and tempermental, he is also extremly loyal to Joseph, and anyone he trusts. Knows: Flamethrower, Blast Burn, Dig, Focus Blast.

2: Dai, Feraligatr, level 45, Clam and collected, and often calms down Baku. Knows: Ice Fang, Aqua Tail, Hydro Cannon, Dragon Claw.

3: Mega, Meganium, level 45, She's motherly and makes sure everyone's okay. Knows: Razor leaf, Body Slam, Frenzy Plant, Synthesis.

4: Ryu, Ampharos, level 40. Elctric, eccentric, and a complete nut. Knows: Thunderbolt, Thunderpunch, Signal Beam, Iron tail

5: Soru, Absol, level 41, Dark, brooding, and quiet. Keeps to himself. Knows: Razor Wind, Swords Dance, Sucker Punch, Night Slash

6: Rio, Lucario, level: 35. Extremly friendly, and carefree Knows: Aura Sphere, Close Combat, Dragon Pulse, Earthquake.

I hope you accept my OC.
Tiramisu Von Hohenzollern chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
I am exceedingly glad that you decided to use my OC as this story seems to be one that will be epic I had wanted as much of a cut as I could and making an OC seemed like the perfect way to do it.

I must say that I am amazed at your ability to type up a chapter so quickly and still make it look so good as I have seen few writers who can deal out updates so quikly.
Titanic X chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Good ficcie! Especially the idea of using weaponry!

Here's my OC.

Name: Terra White

Age: 21

Gender: Female

Personality: She is kind and caring, but she can become ruthless when in battle against Team Galactic. She wants to help stop them, no matter what it takes. She is also very intelligent with tactics, and is a very good strategist when in battle.

History: She was born in Goldenrod City, Johto on the Wartortile Naval Base. She spent most of her childhood there learning about being a trainer and going through general education until her tenth birthday. She went out onto the base's training zone and rescued her first Pokemon, a male Skarmory she named Armordash. After she caught him, she healed him and became his trainer.

She left the base a week later and began her journey, while also joining the Johto Defense Forces at age fifteen. She also spent time in other regions to help maintain the peace and security among the regions of the world.

Appearance:

Hair: Short, messy black hair, bangs kept out of face with a green rag.

Skin tone: tanned

Eye color: Steel grey

Height: six foot one

Weight: 185 pounds, most of it solid muscle

Clothing: a military uniform (think US Army style, but with an addition of a green trenchcoat.)

Items: Grenade-Balls, a new type of Pokeball developed by Johto's leading manufacturer for the military, a flashbang grenade, and several smoke bombs

Relationship: no. She's a loner, but a good team player and leader.

Character death: No. Pokemon death, maybe depending on the situation. But I'm leaning towards no.

Fighting: Yes. She fights using karate, but she is also a surefire marksman with a custom built rifle she obtained from her father when he handed it down to her. It fires grenades, can function as a sniper rifle and submachine gun, but it also carries a small anittank rocket for last resort use alone.

Pokemon: Armordash, Skarmory. Male. Level 56, his moves are Steel Wing, Metal Sound, Spike, Fly, Drill Peck, Aerial Ace, Swift, and Gust. He is honorable and caring, but is also loyal to those who earn his trust. Has a scar on his right eye and is blind in that eye, but more than makes up for it in his speed and accuracy. Trusts Terra with his life.

Chargeblast, Luxray. Male. Level 42, his moves are Flash, Charge Beam, Zap Cannon, Thunder Fang, Thunder, Shockwave, Confusion, and Leer. Chargeblast can be a bit of a rebel, preferring to do what he feels is best in battle, but he will always try to carry out Terra's orders, but in his own way.

Firebeam, Ninetails. Female. Level 44, her moves are Fire Fang, Fire Blast, Flamethrower, Scratch, Agility, Scary Face, and Eruption. She is kind and caring, like Terra, but is also fast and a quick thinker on her feet. She prefers to stay out of combat, but she will fight if necessary.

Panzer, Rhyhorn. Male. Level 45, his moves are Harden, Defense Curl, Rock Polish, Rock Tomb, Rock Throw, Ironhead, Strength, and Flash. He is a defensive fighter, preferring to use his moves in defense of his comrades and Trainer. But that doesn't mean he's pacifist. When pushed hard, he will fight and use his strength to help in any way he sees fit.

Hydroblast, Blastoise. Male. Level 54, his moves are Blizzard, Hydro Pump, Hyper Beam, Water Gun, Surf, Dive, Ice Beam, and Waterfall. His moves provide flexibility when on water battlefields and he is one heck of a warrior, but he can be a bit hotheaded at times. Prefers to use long range, and is a good marksman with his attacks.

Warpstrike, Gardevoire. Female. Level 43, her moves are Sky Uppercut, Return, Leaf Blade, Psychic, Psybeam, Confusion, Teleport, and Barrier. She is a very flexible fighter like Hydroblast, but she is more of a close range specialist. Her greatest strength lies in surprise attacks, which usually catches the enemy off guard.

Note: How abour she's a traveling companion? That would be great. But then again, it's your choice. So you decide. Can't wait to read more!
MidnightheartXxX chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Name: Elizabeth Thomas (Nickname:Liz)

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Hometown, Region: Celadon City, Kanto.

Body: Not tan but isnt pale. Anout 5'6 and 115 pounds. Athletic build

Eyes: Friendly Ice blue eyes

Hair: Blonde shoulder length hair, It is slightly wavy and layered. Has black highlights in it

Clothes: Dark blue denim shorts. Has a white sirt that has a big,red peace sign on it. White converes with Red laces. Red,Black and white striped Knee high socks. Single Red fingerless glove on her left hand.

Personality: She is curious and impulsive. She will create plans to answer her questions. She is outgoing and friendly. Due to being overshadowed she doesnt think she is going enough and will strive to prove herslef to people. She hates it when you insult her pokemon and she will get violent though people usually hold her back. She has been known to have anger issues. If your her enemy she can be one of the coldest people. She isnt shy about what she thinks and many people think that she is to outspoken. She has a major soft spot for little kids becuase she misses her little sister. If you her friend she will listen to your problems and give you advice. One thing is she loves music and if she hears a song she has to stop and lsiten to hates arrogant people and people who make themselves feel better by insulting other people. She tries not to let things get to her but even she has her moments.

History: Growing up in Celadon City, her parents ran a pokemon day care. She was always overshadowed by her brother who seemed to do everything better then her. Ever since then she has strived to beat him and prove herslef worthy. She has been traveling since she was 10 and has competed in every league. (Not the league but confernces) the best she got was 2nd in sinnoh. Her main rival is her brother. A lot of her pokemon she got from her parents.

Relationship: Yes but its up to you.

Dying: Not really lol but up to you(though id prefer if u didnt)

Quirks and fears: She hates Aridos becuase of a incident in the woods. She doesnt like showing it and only her close friends know it. Any pokemon resembling a spider she hates.

Fighting style: Uhmmmmm. a bow? either tht or a sword

Role: Traveling companion? Friend who appears? Im not sure though of course like all OC submiters hope its a big role lol .

Pokemon:

Ivysaur-Male-Stricker- Lvl. 32 Calm and collected. (In regular pokeball)

Moves: Solarbeam, Gigaimpact, ,Giga drain, Synthesis

Altaria-Female-Sun-Lvl. 33 She also shares a love of music and will often be seen humming (In a greatball)

Moves: Aerial ace, Dragonpulse, Sing, Icebeam

Lapras-Female-Mist- Lvl. 36 Motherly one of the group, she will fuss over each pokemon. (In a ultraball)

Moves: Icebeam, Thunderbolt, Brine, Confuse ray

Ninetails-Female-Blaire- Lvl. 35 Loves attention and will make sure she gets it. (In a regular pokeball)

Moves:Flamethrower, Dig, Extransery, Quickattack

Absol-Male-Dusk- Lvl. 33He comes of a little cold to strangers but will warm up to you (Ina luxury ball)

Moves; Razorwind, Pyscocut, Nightslash, Perish song

Kirlia-Female-Light- Lvl. 32 She is the most symathetic to people

Moves: Pyschic, Magical leaf, Teleport, Healing wave

Uhmm I think thts it of theres something i missed just tell me.
Charon the Red chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Good opening chapters. Can't wait to read more!

Character Name: Pandaera (Panda) Takumi

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Personality: Sarcastic, yet kind-hearted. Extremely intelligent.c

History: ( include brief history about their Pokemon ): An orphan at 11 years old, he started out in Johto region with a Cyndaquil. He's traveled all over Kanto, Johto, and Hoenn, competing in every league possible, the farthest he's gotten was the Hoenn League, placing in the top 20. Now he's traveling to Sinnoh / Isshu. Each one of his pokemon he captured, has come with him on their on volition, with the exception if Spiritomb, which was captured while violent, but became friendly. Somehow.

Briefly describe their appearance, clothing and items: Dark blue jeans, crimson shirt, trench coat. 6'3, soft green hair, deep blue eyes, dark skin. His right arm is a fake, hydraulic metal arm. He has a 53cm-long katana on his back.

Would you like this character to enter a relationship with another?: Yeah; either May or another OC. Up to you.

Are you okay with this character or their Pokemon dying?: Only if it's to save someone else; Pokemon is an absolute no.

Fighting? If so, describe how they fight/weapon(s): Yes. Uses a mixture of hand-to-hand combat for power and his katana for speed.

Pokemon: ( you may have ONE fifth gen. Pokemon, but no more than that. :3 )

1: No Nickname, Aggron (Male), 43, Brave Nature, Double-Edge, Thunderbolt, Flamethrower, Toxic

2: No Nickname, Typhlosion (Female), 64, Rash Nature, Purgatory, Overheat, Attract, Wild Bolt

3: No Nickname, Muk (Male), 50, Quirky Nature, Payback, Acid Armor, Gunk Shot, Fire Blast

4: No Nickname, Riolu (Male), 35, Adamant Nature, Force Palm, Sword Dance, Reversal, Payback (Want to Evolve into Lucario, Switch Reversal for Aura Sphere)

5: 'The Pain In The Ass', Smoochum, 40, Sassy Nature, Psychic, Ice Beam, Attract, Double Team (Can Be Jynx. The nickname is used once in a while.)

6: Shadowbane, Spiritomb (Male), 55, Mild Nature, Dark Pulse, Nasty Plot, Sucker Punch, Will-O-Wisp
Frozen Seagull chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Wow, that's fast updating! I loved this chapter, poor grunts got fried :'D I'll be waiting for the next one, especially now that Piper's in ;D

Update soon! :)
U R Beautiful chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
YAY! You used her! ok, so cutting her pokemon's moves down to four... I'll do that now...

Katy's pokemon:

Freya's moves: energy ball, iron tail, magical leaf, double team

Ares' moves: Iron tail, protect, poison jab, zen headbutt

Honey's moves: iron tail, zap cannon, volt tackle, shock wave

Bunny's moves: iron tail, aqua tail, sing, rain dance

Belle's moves: iron tail, aqua ring, quick attack, water pulse

Aollo's moves: iron tail, extreme speed, flame wheele, fire fang

Anyways great second chapter! I'm really excited to see how the story continues to enfold out! Update again soon!
tealcloud chapter 2 . 11/8/2010
here you go! Good story btw! If you need to change anything or something just PM me _

Character Name: Echo Valentine

Age: 15 (you can raise this if you want)

Gender: Female

Personality: Echo is an odd person to most people. She is a (almost painfully, as some people say) carefree girl usually seen smiling and being cheerful. She never seems seriously. Most people call her crazy for not using doors as a means of entry into a room. Simply she uses a window, cupboard, closet, bed, table, etc, effectively scaring people. She also exits the same way. Most people see her as an innocent girl, but this is not the case. She is very manipulative and cunning, but only to service her interests. She doesn't really interact with people unless she needs something from them or find them amusing. She tends to put her own interests above others. Has a bad habit of not being able to tell a fact from lie and some people see as an idiot for her care-free ways.

History: Echo is originally from the Kanto region. She used to live with her parents and grandparents before going off into a pokemon journey. Her first pokemon was a charmander then Nidoran (female), Poliwag which she still uses in their evolved forms. Later she went to the Sinnoh region when her mother and father made her run an family errand where she caught swablu, Absol and duskull. She later ran into Team Galactic and just joined. She mostly sweet talked people so she can get her position.

Briefly describe their appearance, clothing and items: Echo stands at 5'2" and is a pretty lanky girl. She gives an innocent vibe with large blue eyes and waist length golden blonde hair. Her hair is usually pulled into loose two pigtails, with lose strands framing her face. She has bit of a cat like appearance.

For clothes, she wears a white sleeveless vest with the galactic symbol on her right chest with a long sleeve black dress underneath. The dress is rather plain and stops an inch above her knees (she has short underneath). For shoes, she wears white boots with gray socks that come to her knees.

Would you like this character to enter a relationship with another?: Eh, if you can find a pairing for her...sure

Are you okay with this character or their Pokemon dying?: Hmm...I actually have no problem with her dying since I developed her as more of a form of entertainment...but if you want, you can. Her pokemon I rather not die...

Fighting? If so, describe how they fight/weapon(s): She doesn't really fight, more like dodges furiously and walks away. she usually gets someone to fight for her.

Pokemon: ( you may have ONE fifth gen. Pokemon, but no more than that. :3 )

1: Charizard aka Flame about level 40. Nature: Naughty. Moves: Flame burst, Wing Attack, Earthquake, Protect

2: Nidoqueen aka Queenly about 37. Nature: Brave. Moves: Focus Punch, Sludge Bomb, Substitute, Body Slam

3: Poliwrath aka Swirly about 41. Nature: Jolly. Move: Ice Punch, Brick Break, Belly Drum, substitute

4: Altaria aka Puff about 39. Nature: Calm. Moves: Rest, Dragon Claw, Perish Song, steel wing

5: Absol aka White about 34. Nature: Jolly. Moves: Return, Shadow Ball, Swords Dance, Baton Pass

6: Dusclops aka Eye about 38. Nature: Bold. Moves: Calm Mind, Psychic, Body Slam, Shadow Punch
PhantoMNiGHT321 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Character Name: Avrey Wilson

Age:15

Gender:Boy

Personality:He's calm most of the time keeping cool. that changes when he's around an unfamiliar girl around his age. He becomes very shy. He's nice and kind. He's fairly smart not caring to show it at all. He doesn't like being told what to do, it depends on his mood and who it is whether or not he'll follow or not. Most insult don't faze him so he doesn't get made too easy. He likes to make people laugh a lot. He likes to taught his opponents. He can be both modest(on account of shyness) and cocky.

History: After starting his adventure in Ever Grande City of Hoenn, he participated in the Hoenn League. He won and challenged the Elite 4 losing to Drake. The same happened in the Sinnoh League where he just barely lost to Cynthia's Garchomp. He's participated in the Hoenn and Sinnoh Battle Frontiers and won both. He was a Frontier Brain in Sinnoh for a short time before he got bored and wanted to venture some more. He took his adventure to Isshu. Now he travels, helping when he can, becoming stronger, and making new friends.

Briefly describe their appearance, clothing and items: Dark Skin. 5ft 10in. Average build. Green Eyes. Black Medium-long Braided hair./Black pants with green hexagon lines design on the lower thigh. Long Black Jacket that reaches knees with same design on the back. Green and white shirt. Necklace with Green Hexagon at the end.

Would you like this character to enter a relationship with another?: He'll gain a crush on Destiny Marie Starr but will be to shy to say anything about it.

Are you okay with this character or their Pokemon dying?: No, Absolutely not! If he dies it'll fell like I died.

Fighting? If so, describe how they fight/weapon(s): He has a mix of martial arts and street fighting like style. Likes to fight with acrobatic style(flips, handstands, spins etc.) He punches pretty hard but his kicks(well all I can say is you better dodge them) are powerful.

Pokemon: ( you may have ONE fifth gen. Pokemon, but no more than that. :3 )

1: Sceptile/Lvl 88/Boy/Calm,Naughty/Leaf Blade, Solar Beam, Leaf Storm, Quick Attack

2: Latios/Lvl 85/Boy/Lazy/Draco Meteor, Psychic, Dragon Breath, Luster Purge

3: Lopunny/Lvl 84/Girl/Flirty/Ice Beam, Bounce, Dizzy Punch, Hyper Beam

4: Lucario/Lvl 84/Boy/Shy,Naughty/Close Combat, Extreme Speed, Bone Rush, Aura Sphere

5: Zoroark/Lvl 86/Girl/Shy,Determined/Night Burst, Night Slash, Shadow Ball, Shadow Claw

6: Infernape/Lvl 85/Boy/Naughty,Cool/Close Combat, Flame Wheel, Flare Blitz, Mach Punch

BTW if you don't want me to have the Legendary like Latios(even though he's not that legendary and is just more rare than legendary) let me know and I'll change it. Also, if you think he's too young and his pokemon are too strong let me know.
Fuzzy Teeth chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Cool start for a story. I like to drop an oc.

Character Name:Kellen Sraten

Age:17

Gender:M

Personality: Easy-going and excitable. He likes to mess with anything and everything. He's also a touchy-feely kind of person. But he knows when its a no-no. He twitches alot.

History: Born in sandgem town, his starter pokemon was a chimchar. His mother had bought him an evee to also later on evoled into a umbreon. He's an only child, and was somewhat spoiled.

Briefly describe their appearance, clothing and items:

Would you like this character to enter a relationship with another?: i dont care if he does

Are you okay with this character or their Pokemon dying?:no

Fighting? If so, describe how they fight/weapon(s): wildly, or until he runs outta steam (aka with anything at hand)

Pokemon:

1: ( include nickname if they have one, species, approximate level, nature and moves )

2: ( include nickname if they have one, species, approximate level, nature and moves )

3: ( include nickname if they have one, species, approximate level, nature and moves )

4: ( include nickname if they have one, species, approximate level, nature and moves )

5: ( include nickname if they have one, species, approximate level, nature and moves )

6: ( include nickname if they have one, species, approximate level, nature and moves )
Tiramisu Von Hohenzollern chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Hello there I just stumbled across this yesterday and when i heard you were looking for OCs i thought 'why not its not liek ive got anyhitng better to do' so um here it is.

BTW could you make my OC a Team Galactic admin.

Name: Henry Montressor

age:21

Gender: male

personality: seems like an extremely cold, cruel man who does not care one bit for the wellfare of others. But is a reasonably nice person once you become his friend.

History: Was born in the Hoenn region to a wealthy family. when he left on his own he chose a mudkip that has now long since evolved to a swampert. later he caught a meowth (evolved into persian), and a ralts (who evolved into gardevoir). later on a visit to the Johto region he recieved a cyndaquil(evolved to a typhlosion) and later when he when to the sinnoh region he caught a budew(evolved into roserade) and a staraptor. He then at the age of 20 inherited his familys fortune and joined team galactic. he was able to bribe his way up through the ranks till finnally reaching admin status.

Briefly descride thier apearance, clothing and items: HE is extremely tall, has medium brown hair, and blue eyes. he is usually wearing a trench coat with the galactic symbol on the sleeves,black pants and a fedora hat. also has a golden ring around his middle finger.

relationship?: yeah sure

OK with death?: im ok with roserade, staraptor and gardevoir dieing but thats it.

fighting: usually uses hand to hand combat but when the situation calls for it has a m9 semi automatic pistol hidden in breast pocket.

Pokemon:(actual pokemon from soul silver)

Nocturn, typhlosion, approximate level 80, hasty, moves: sunny day, blast burn, flame thrower, double edge.

swampert, approximate level 70, calm, moves: surf, waterfall, hydro cannon, return.

moneta, persian, approximate level 45, calm, moves: nasty plot, payday, giga impact, hyper beam.

staraptor, approximate level 65, brave, moves: fly, brave bird, close combat, aerial ace.

roserade: approximate level 60, timid, moves:giga drain, cut, toxic spikes, petal dance.

gardevoir: approximate level 55, modest, moves: psychic, magical leaf, confusion, future sight.

so there i hope you use it please contact me if there are any concerns.
U R Beautiful chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Character Name: Katy Black

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Personality: She's, over all, a reasonable person. She's moderately polite to everyone she meets. She has long since perfected the cruel calculating smile perfect for dealing with enemies, and is generally a good person to half by your side. She's a bit of natural peace maker, and loves cuddly thinks (little kids, adorable pokemon). She's extremely protective of the people she cares about and pokemon, though in general on the quieter side.

History: She grew up in Hoenn, with two older brothers, and older sister, a twin sister, triplet younger brothers, and a little sister. Her childhood was a bit hectic, though by the time she was 7 all three of her older siblings had left on their journeys, and she was, more or less, forced to become the 'sane' one of crazy-huge family, learning from an early age the best way to defuse a triple explosion, how to deal with her too-girly-for-words younger twin, and which tactics were most successful in making her youngest sister to stop crying. At age 10 she was more than ready to escape from it all. She was quick to select a female treeko with a pale blue flower sticking out of the corner of her mouth as her starter, naming her "Freya". During her journey in Hoenn she quickly bonded with Freya and two other pokemon who would become her 'core' pokemon, and become one of the eventual 6 who'd become her favorites to battle with, her untrusting Riolu "Ares" and happy-go-luck pichu "Honey". (more on them and her other pokemon in the pokemon section). After Hoenn she seperated from her twin and began to travel on her own in the other regions.

Briefly describe their appearance, clothing and items: Average height, pale skin, midnight blue eyes, silver-blond hair. She generally wears a silvery gray v-neck darkwash jeans, along with a navy-blue cholker and silver bangles and a watch around her left wrist. She carries her stuff in a dark gray messanger bag and wears black boots.. She has a giant white sweatshirt if she gets cold. She also keeps two slim knives tucked in her shoes.

Would you like this character to enter a relationship with another?: yesh please! D

Are you okay with this character or their Pokemon dying?: I'm ok with some of then dying, just not Freya, Honey, or Ares.

Fighting? If so, describe how they fight/weapon(s): Knives

Pokemon: in the order she caught them in...

1: Treeko "Freya" F: Her starter pokemon, she prefers to stay out of her pokeball and sit on Katy's head. She seems pretty weak, but is actually one of Katy's strongest pokemon.

level: about 50 or 60 I guess...? She's her first pokemon ever...

nature: Naive

moves: leech seed, energy ball, double team, iron tail, solar beam, magical leaf

2: Riolu "Ares" M: He was a present from her oldest brother who was a breeder. He only really gave him to her because Ares was beating up all of his other pokemon, but in the end it was a great gift. It took Katy a while to gain his trust and respect, but now he'd probably die for her if needed.

level: 45ish

nature: Naughty

moves: iron tail, zen headbutt, protect, brick break, poison jab, focus punch

3: Pichu "Honey" M: Honey was originally her twin sister's, how ever Katy's twin did contests, while Honey had a knack for battling. In the end Katy traded her Pachirisu for Honey. He's extremely babyish, but is actually her second most powerful pokemon.

level: 50ish

nature: Impish

moves: Iron Tail, charge beam, thunderbolt, shock wave, zap cannon, volt tackle

4: Chillarmy "Bunny" F: A gift from her younger siblings given to her after their vacation to the Isshu region they went on while she was traveling in Sinnoh, and nambed by her the baby of the family, her then 5-year-old sister. she tends to be more of a cheerleader than a battler but if provoked turns feirce.

level: 40

nature: Timid

moves: iron tail, aqua tail, Vengeance, rain dance, sunny day, sing

also if you could, I'd like if this one would evolve eventually...

5: Vaporeon "Belle" F: Katy found her on the beach, injured, while in Johto. After taking her to the pokemon center to be healed, she battled and captured her. Belle is a bit vain, and acts almost motherly towards the others.

level: 45ish

nature: Sassy

moves: iron tail, aqua ring, quick attack, water gun, icy wind, water pulse

6: Arcanine "Apollo" M: As a Growlithe, he attacked her for food. After defeating him with, Freya of all pokemon, he realized he was weak, and traveled with her on hopes of getting stronger.

level: 50ish

nature: Rash

moves: Iron tail, flame wheel, extreme speed, fire fang, heat wave, flamethrower, overheat

Also, her battling style tends to use more speed than strength, and her pokemon specialize in coming out of no where with an iron tail, her signature move.
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