great job...God bless

I absolutely thought Greyback was going to take a literal bite of Lupin's flesh like a burger. glad he didnt. also glad Lupin, while vulnerable was not so much as to let the girl get attacked. good work. very believeable!

this was fascinating & a tad sexual

Very well done ... This satisfied some of my needs that I've been looking for in a Greyback x Lupin fic
Hope to read more from you or a continuation of this lol

Well, it's not like that was creepy or something...

Even if it was a bit creepy, that was a really good fic. I don't think you need to have the rating that high, though. How old was Remus in here? It'll help me get a better mental picture. Again, this is awesome. Keep writing!

I love the way you word things and this is an awesome story. :3

I really loved this story. Especially how you managed to avoid it being sexual in any way. You did a great job of keeping them both in character, and I love the plot line.

I can't wait to read more from you!

This is very well written. I enjoy your style.

I love the silent interplay between the characters and how you get right into Lupin's head. My sister showed me this story and I'm so glad she did. Thank you for writing it. I'd love to know the poem that inspired this.

I really enjoyed reading this! I love Lupin and you portrayed him really well :) will read more of your fics :D

This was fantastically written. I really enjoy fiction about these two and their obvious alpha beta sides. I like how it is more...pronounced. I mean, people in general come in alphas, betas, etc but we are far less animalistic (in public) than werewolves in fiction who are more openly animalistic. I think that is why I like it. It isn't wrong for them to be openly animalistic. Anyway, I am rambling. This was fantastic. I really connected with Remus's emotions. It was fantastic. I think you should write more with these two. You did very well.

I really enjoyed this story! Lupin is my fave character and I am always looking for more to read about him. Stuff that really gets into his head you know? Well anyways thank you for the enjoyable fic. :)

I really loved the growing tension you created, it was actually quite scary and you portrayed the anxiety and vulnerability in Lupin really well

Very well done :)