Reviews for Where We Start
katmuel chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
That was great! More chapters would be awesome though.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
I Realize the series has moved on but would live to see you continue this with you own thoughts.
Deleted Account 91 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Definite possibility for more chapters if you're not too busy to write them!

Loved this! Thought Harry's reaction to him and Ruth having sex was very real, too

LBx
georgia chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
I really loved this story. I love seeing the vunerable side of Ruth and how much the last few months have effected her. I hope that its not a one-shot because I would really like to read more! good job!
x-La vie en rose-x chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I don't know why I didn't review this when I first read it. :/ I loved it. Such a delicate topic and you wrote it so well. Thanks. Now I'm off to read the sequel. :)
Rosettaston3 chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Finally. A realistic love scene.

Both are in so much pain, especially Ruth. What can be more realistic than two such people reaching for one another?

But the aftermath?

AH...

The way you describe Ruth's back turned to him and Harry's self-recriminations is ome of the most realistic and painful H/R scenes I've read.

And you know what?

It was also terribly intimate.

You got into their heads and souls. And what's more, you didn't have to describe every little move that they made. It's simply and beautifully understood.

And because you did not overwrite the scene, imo, ultimately it's memorable as well as intimate.

Yes. Sometimes less IS more.

So, More?

:)

I hope so.

It's lovely to read good writing, characterization, AND a mature H/R pov.

Thanks for writing this!
Novindalf chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Fabulous fic, and I'd love for you to continue!
SureFineWhatever chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Wow, this is beautiful!

I really want to see the "happy, bonkers, clumsy Ruth" again too :) Would love to read more!

X
Rambling Scribe chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
I like this. Angsty but with hope at the end. Really good. :)

I think it works well as a one shot. Up to you, though. :)

xx
cbjfan61 chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
OOoooo I liked this. I see it as you can continue and bring some sort of ending that of course all H/R fans need. Or you can leave it as is and it is fine as a one-shot.
gottalovett chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I really enjoyed this :) I would love a companion fic where Ruth seeked professional help if you were up for it too :)
HRFan chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Keep going! THis is too good not to continue with it...
Ceridwyn2 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
I'd love it if you'd continue this some more, show some progression that they're moving to heal.
spooksfan08 chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Oh update. Really liked this.
eggwhisker chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Aww - that's lovely. It works really really well as a one shot so maybe a companion fic would be in order (I'm never going to say no to more fic from you!). thanks for sharing
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