Hetty and her team are doing a shit job protecting her.

Excellent writing! I can't stop reading it. I know this was written years ago but I hope you are still writing. I am definitely on the edge of my seat. Best fanfiction I've read!

"Iowa? That's a horrible place to send someone."... i live in iowa. lol

Would of liked the know what was going on in the room instend of kensi im done whenever deeks gets spme focus its always through kemsi's pov and she never seems to know whats happenings seems your to lazy to actually write whats going on

Amazing how callen only seems to give a shit about deeks because it eould "break" kensi this story is so pathetic

Seens cery much about kensi im out

This is one of the best or maybe even the best fictions I have ever read. It was powerful. I had to stop at certain points in the story because of the effect it was having on me. You're an amazing author.

Ugh found this is a google search for DEEKS fanfictions should of known it would be about her.

Just like all other fanfictions in the end its always about the females.

I LOVED THIS. Im glad you finished, since a lot of the ones i read just start to get good, and then theyre never updated. Good job, thoroughly enjoyed it

I just read this amazing story and wanted to say how beautifully written it is. You know, it's never too late for a sequel! You ended this in a perfect place, really, I can't complain. But it would do my heart good to see them a little further on, to see what happened to them both. Did Deeks return to work? (I hope not- I root for full time pro bono work for the folks at the shelter.) Did Kensi ever face her rape? (I hope so, and would love to see that part of her journey.)

Anyway, thanks so much for such a powerful story.

This is the second time I'm reading this story and I'm still amazed how well written and how amazing this story is! I love everything about it... you write Deeks and Kensi so well, it's unbelievable! I wish you had written more story about them! Thank you... I'm gonna read your other stories until I come back to this one!

I just found this story a couple of days ago and just finished reading it. It's a fantastic story and I'm blown away by the way your writing pulled me into the story. I literally had a hard time putting it down. Great job!

I just found this to read and it is an amazing story about Deeks, Kensi, and undercover life. You captured Deeks just perfectly. I can see you are no longer writing for this fandom, I wish you would return, but whatever you are doing now, I hope you are still writing, you are a very gifted writer.

Painful and beautiful. Stunning-I cannot imagine a better story

This blew me away, I'm an avid reader and this was amazing. You have a gift and I thank you for sharing this amazing piece of work. Some deep stuff, I was moved, scared, happy. Simply perfect.