Loved it! I like how you didn’t overdo it or under do it with the pain/injury/dire circumstances. It was all very believable!

This is amazing! I love Danny's internal dialogue. Well done.

Love this story. It was awesomely shaped and I enjoyed how Danny had made all those lists and sub-lists and the sub of his sub-lists. Funny where your mind tenda to go when you let it loose. That about the strawberries was an interesting detail, too. And Danny knowing it was all related to Steve. Having an ohana caring for you may do wonders and he'll like Hawaii before he can say pineapple. That with the popsicle made me laugh.

You did a wonderful job getting inside Danny's head and showing us what makes him tick and how he thinks and how the things he says don't always reflect the way he really feels. Very good work.

Thank you so much for posting; I loved it!

Awesome story, shows great insight into the characters. Loved it! Thanks for sharing :)

Nice little one shot.

What a great story!

OMG This is awesome. Good work on capturing Danny's thoughts, but I just have one question, how did Steve figure out Danny was in the cage?
However, I can gladly let that slide because this story was so amazing. Great work :) ! And You captured the personality-s perfectly.. One other thing.. Do his cousins have tv's? xD

Awww! I love it! It's poor Danny getting all abused again, and his concerned teammates. Great idea about the lists, I can totally picture him counting how many times Steve's gotten him shot to pass the hours. The end where he FINALLY gets rescued is cute too. I enjoyed reading that. Almost as much as I'm enjoying watching the show.

I love your fics. Thank you for sharing them. Q-How did they find Danno?

I love this story.

Che meravigliosa squadra, bellissima storia, è bello sapere che ognuno di loro può contare sull'aiuto degli altri.
Stupendo, ciao alla prossima.

Good story. Really enjoyed it. Exactly what i was looking for.

thanks :)

What was that I said about not letting Danny wind up in the hospital again? Seriously. :P You're putting him through as much torture as Steve exposes him to! (The making of lists and sub-lists and sub-sub-lists was great.) I'd love a follow-up/tag to this one, with them catching this Simmons guy, and getting revenge on him. Perhaps with Danny's ...creative input, lol. I can only imagine the phone call that would result once Rachel found out. Poor thing. (Danny.) Made me sympathetically weary and exhausted while reading! I'm glad I'm not stuck in a cage underwater, cuffed awkwardly so I couldn't sleep. Sheesh. These ingenious criminals of Hawaii, I tell ya. :P Good thing we've got ingenious good guys to get after 'em and hang them off rooftops!