This a really good story. I do wish it had been longer and had a little drama. I do think the beginning chapters didn't need to be so long. I found my self skipping through it and reading very little until Arizona finally came in the picture. Loved it still.

I'm sorry, but Max 123 is right. the story is good, but all the written stuff at the beginning of each chapter is annoying. ... nobody reads that and you always have to scroll and search for the beginning of the chapter. This makes the story exhausting and exhausting is a story killer

Thanks for sharing! Your story is really wonderful!

Why do you write all that crap up top ? It's almost as long as the story'!

What a lovely story sadness and happiness lovely ending thank you

U stop writing all that crap up top u might be able to make the story longer!

That's just ridiculous all that writing top & bottom,no wonder u only got 105 reviews!

Why do u and other writers write all that crap at the top and bottom of the page? U could make the story longer with out it.

Very nice way to finish the story. Curious as to the people she left behind in LA, not just Addie but Violet and Charlotte too, as they were a part of her life as well. But I love how they're planning their future. And I love how they talked about the 'what ifs' as well. Thank you so much for a wonderful story!

That was simply beautiful! Love how Callie persuaded her into the shower. After that, it was a foregone conclusion how that would end. But it was done beautifully. So glad to see them together like this!

"Back where we belong." - Best line in the entire chapter! Very glad to see them home together, and taking comfort in just laying together in bed. The necklace bit was beautiful, and so glad that Arizona did not throw away hers. I think I would have been shocked if she had. And yes, the evidence (tissues) is plain to see, but its not something Arizona didn't already know. They still need to talk, and figure out where they go from here. But its great just to see them together like this! Just curious about something. I remember reading a Rizzoli and Isles fic where Jane was injured in a train crash. Some of her personal items still had her blood on it. Is that something the hospital staff would try to clean up a little for them? Or do they just bag it and leave it as is?

Love the talk Addie had with Arizona. Glad someone came out and said it. I love that they're all supportive of her, and its obvious that she's still very much in love with Callie. But they keep hurting each other and that needs to stop. Obviously its not going to stop just because of what Addie said, but I hope it will at least get her thinking. Love how Callie is not angry about the accident just because it brought her Arizona. That is so incredibly sweet! I mean, she's so badly injured! Really enjoying this :)

"You didn't at first." - One thing Callie had a lot of trouble letting go of. Something else that made her feel as if she wasn't enough. Glad to see them talking, really talking about how they feel and what they want. Are they still moving too fast? Don't they normally! Another important point here is trust. Does Callie trust Arizona to stay? Not yet. But there's nothing specific Arizona can do right now to prove that she will stay. She has to slowly earn that trust back. I always wondered though, on the show, did she really earn that trust back? I thought she did when they were married, but there was always something there that made me wonder. But even though Arizona made that choice, Callie is also partly to blame. Their lack of good communication plays a huge part in their problems.

Yay she's awake!Very glad to see Callie's family so supportive and accepting of Arizona. Now, all that's left is for these two to forgive each other, and themselves, and figure this out! Cause nothing is settled yet. They love each other, very obviously. But they still need to talk. Very glad that she's finally awake. And that she asked for Arizona. And that Arizona was there.

I understand that Maria and Mark, Addie and Teddy, are all trying to help her cope with this. But everything, especially what Maria said, just points to how much Callie was in love with her. And how hurt she must have been. As much comfort as she's getting from them, it has to hurt all that much more too. What a wonderful chapter! So much going on, so much conveyed, with so little actually written!