You crushed my soul

This could have been better but you write as if Quinn should just get over it. So stupid.

This just really bothered me: If Quinn and Jacob were looking at each other (and I'm assuming he was looking at her to confirm she didn't look away) and he shot himself in the mouth. Quinn would not have gotten covered in brain matter maybe a little blood but not a whole lot. The trajectory for the bullet and brain matter would be behind Jacob.

okay so this was really depressing but also freaking amazing

Holy shit, dude.

Honestly the best work I've read on here in years, at least. I'm all about angst and slow-burn relationships.

Anyway I know this story is old, but I wanted to let you know how awesome I think it is! I loved that you included so many different points of view and Quinn's downward spiral was heartwrenching.

I am kind of disappointed with this story. Your spelling and grammar was perfectly fine, but the story itself was just lacking. There was far too much angst, and the few fluffy moments didn't do much to balance it. The fact that the entire conflict in this story was the fact that Quinn wouldn't talk about her problems made it all seem dull. Realistic, maybe, but not much of a story. And when it's all solved and done with, you through in a hasty epilogue for an almost "happily-ever-after".

Don't get me wrong, this was still a good story, but I feel it could have been so much more. Although I'm a little biased; I usually have trouble reading tragedies and angst-fests.

Thanks, I like it :-)

Man I love it!

You would start hallucinating after three days. You can't go two months without sleep. You would die.

You can't stay awake for more then three days. You're body would make you sleep. You wouldn't be able to drive let alone do any of these other things. It doesn't matter what you take or if you are standing, you would fall asleep.

This story is...weird. The beginning is well done and legit scary, which i get was mostly ripped from OTH. But the dialogue i think was mostly original and it worked. After that it become 2 very different stories within the same story, you have Quinn's struggle to cope, which was compelling and pretty well written, then you have the weird sort of romance building between her and Rachel and that mostly doesnt work. It probably would have worked better as just a friendship. The way in which Quinn opens up is also a bit anti-climatic after the build up. There is also some kind of humor which mostly doesn't quite work for me. Overall its a good premise with some really solid writing (Quinn's struggle) but its bogged down by the romance of it. I understand wanting Faberry together but if it doesnt suit the story its ok to let them just be friends or something.

Ive read this twice already so far this year. I don't like angst stories at all, but couldn't turn away from this. Detail and depth is amazing, captivating and addicting. Amazing writing. Thanks heaps for sharing

This a fantastic story. Truly awesome. You are a gifted writer, and I will definitely be checking out your other stories as well! : )

Wow, loved it!

This story was awesome :) well done and keep up the good work!