If, as your profile says, you're just writing this for your enjoyment, why do you even bother posting it? Why not just type it into a Microsoft Word file and leave it there?
I'm not saying you should, because it's good stuff. I'm just curious.

Great crossover with two of my favorite shows!
And a CLIFFHANGER...!

Good work, keep it up.

Just read through your original version, now I'm looking forward to the rest of this re-vamp. It's a great story.

i love how the re-write is going, and i hope you update with more soon. although i wouldn't have placed this in Martha's time with the Doctor, i do like that its kind of a story from much of the time with Martha he had that we didn't know about.

yeaahhh.. riiiiiight... EXTERMINEREN! wotevah.

dude I love this story...

kaCHING! DOCTOR BITCHFACE! aWRIGHT~!

Glad to see this again, and will look forward to the changes you make in this new version.