Reviews for Connections in Blue and Bronze
Principi Phantasia chapter 4 . 4/29/2011
Heheh aww loves Luna Lovegood! :D

So different (positively!) with her subtle intelligence and knowledge, and just plain remarkable! heheh

Hmm so Pansy was upset because of both Lavender and Astoria? Hmm...

I pity her a little :/

Interesting how unlike the others, you wrote it from the other characters' POV instead of the main character's heheh

I thought Luna's hair was unkempt heheh

And I thought the partnering was Slytherin-Ravenclaw, Gryffindor-Hufflepuff? *at least I think that's what I read..*

And that pairing would work better too, I think.. heheh
Principi Phantasia chapter 3 . 4/29/2011
Lovely! I like the matching titles you make for each part heheh and they start with the same letters also! XP

I especially loved the exchange between Michael and Dean near the end X3
Principi Phantasia chapter 2 . 4/29/2011
Awesome take on Victoire's strong personality! heheheh

And how creative of you to make a scene between Victoire and a dead Nymphadora Tonks..

Creative use of characters :)

Nice plot, great job Sanjana! :)
Principi Phantasia chapter 1 . 4/29/2011
I loved the connections you made between Cho and the other characters! :)

You totally kept her in character, and I love the story flow :)

Interesting insight to Cho Chang's mind.. heheh
oh nargles chapter 9 . 1/15/2011
Hmm this is one of the first stories I've read that Astoria is actually nice in! Great Job!
oh nargles chapter 8 . 1/15/2011
This story is bloody fantastic, I wonder if these stories could actually get published worldwide.
oh nargles chapter 7 . 1/15/2011
(Blinking) Weird that's pretty much most of what I've got to say, weird, Roger Davies is reminding me of the EgosticalDraco that sometimes people use in their fics.
oh nargles chapter 6 . 1/15/2011
*Bursting into tears* Molly died! It's impossible that woman has so much strength that I'm scared. I know it's a bit irrationl to be scared of a fictional character but it's true. Good work on this chapter by the way.
oh nargles chapter 5 . 1/15/2011
Hmm, a bit of a shock with the red-head bit, (pause) out of all the chapters I think this is my favourite so far.
oh nargles chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
Excellent characterization of Luna, it fits her perfectly. I don't have much to say actually now.
oh nargles chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
I'm liking this story more and more, I like the fact that people are doing the minor characters. I'm hoping now that maybe that there's a story like this one but of the Slytherins.
oh nargles chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
(Silence) Is Victoire Weasley actually a Ravenclaw? Oh well you did a good job any way. Hmm I was wondering? Have you done Teddy/Victoire fics before because I believe that this is genuine stuff, brilliant actually, not one of the characters were OOC, that really bugs me sometimes but you've got this down to pat.
oh nargles chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Hmm, (beaming face. Excellent, I normally don't read stuff not to do with Dramione or Parody and Humor relating to Voldemort, but this isn't so bad it's one of the first Harry Potter fics that I've read that actually shows Cho's point of view so good job!
whatabeautifulmess chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Poor Cho! I feel quite sorry for her here, knowing that she really wanted to go to the Yule Ball with Harry, not Cedric. It was really well-written and you got her character over well.
Bad Mum chapter 8 . 12/16/2010
I loved this so much. I like how you showed that the lives and deaths of three people who Anthony hadn't been particularly close to affected him and made him think beyond his ravenclaw cleverness to see that there was more to life.
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