I don't get why you author make Kenpachi keep saying women are weak when his dream is DEFEATING a woman,his master! For Kenpachi everyone is weak not only women. You are making him annoying af.

Be nice. It is a good story.

No flames? Nah. Where's the fun in that? I read a third of the first chapter and immediately gave up. why is this sorry excuse of a piece of sh!t one of the most reviewed stories in the OC section? Your characters are cliche, predictable, Mary Sues. This absolute waste of time should go in the recycle bin icon on your computer. You just wasted a few minutes of my life that I will never have back. Thanks, you m0ron.

Awe Kayo~ Also, I don't see why swinging a sword should be that hard. If you learn the forms, it is quite easy..

Uhh, Kayo didn't cry like that when Rangiku touched her? What even? Also, Kaori is not even close to being cute anymore o.O She needs to chill major time. xD

Why get in trouble for fights when the division is known for fighting? That is odd. I like Kayo though, she is so shy and cute, I hope she starts interacting with Toshiro more~

Ewww she smokes. :l At least Kayo is still adorable~

Oh, yupp. Riko should be with Byakuya, that would be funny as hell. They would butt heads a lot xD

Kaori would be cute with Kenpachi, not sure I would like Riko with him as she doesn't seem nearly as adorable but it could be interesting to see how she interacts with Ikkaku and Yumichika

You know you could always ask another writer to do it for you, the lemons I mean.

While this is an excellent story and I love all the characters... it's a little too slow paced for me. I stuck through 32 chapters and loved it but it feels like nothing is happening.

Ok...Why didn't Byakuya get dragged out? Hmm?

good chapter really good made me laugh a lot !

you just picked my favourite captains you are a genious

I really really love this story! Especially riko amd her taichou hahha, so cute and interesting. Make a sequel of u have time please!