This is just so perfect, captures Peter pretty perfectly I think.

I like it! It's awesome! :D

That was great. Of course Narnia would have that kind of effect on him. *applause*

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good story.

Awesome story to fit the ending of the movie. Honestly, I never gave the bullies much thought at the end of the movie but I could so see Peter apologizing and making amends. lol

Now, THAT was Peter the Magnificent. Nicely written.

And, I agree with what's already been said. It's not AU because it doesn't contradict the movie, it simply adds to it.

A very nice oneshot and graceful ending to a scene I never particularly enjoyed in the movies. Very well done.

That was really cool! really awesome :) keep up the good work

Thoughtfully written fic. And it's not too AU! :D

Wow, the first I've been on in months!

This is a nice little fic. Great job, redrose!

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Interesting story. Please write soon.

great story really liked it alot.

It was too AU! Ah man you completely trashed it! Haha, just kidding. This was actually really good. I liked how you added a little more depth to the boys who attacked Peter in the movie. Well done. Hey keep up the good work on your writing. :)

I like it, nice writing

I didn't think it was AU. I liked it. It shows that Peter has honestly changed and I liked the bit about the crown. That was good too.

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