i appreciate the realism. it just fucking sucks because it hurt my poor heart! oh you're good. that transition from angst to your whacky ending words always kill though. as much as i wanted a satisfying middle finger back to the beyotch, this actually works... it's uncertain. you know what they always say. a story focuses on the chapters of one life but not necessarily cap the beginning til end, so i appreciate this. (oh no, am i enabling this unfinished fic pattern? i can hear pitchforks and torches coming for me! that would be a concept)

I'm a lamb being led to slaughter. and the absolute no brain in me keeps on walking to my demise. i have vague feelings that this last chapter will hurt. because the end's forever a mystery or whatever will happen to sam next, i have no damn clue.

i like your a/ns. would be awkward if i liked them more than your story, right? ;) but hey, what is Carly's deal? I don't understand too much because i too don't have much friendships lol

hmmm
carly in the fray? ought to be interesting. so you are one of those writers who plans shit, has their story write for themselves and that end up way differently than first imagined. high five!
serious note, oh sam.. Carly's been your lifeline sure, because your life is one lottery ticket away from debt, but dependency isn't the answer. im not sure Carly's the person who'll pull you thru. she has life, and you're too in deep for her short hands to reach. I don't think she's that martyr (masochistic) friend who will expect bloody punches to fish out for a chance of your elusive honesty. idk. she'll listen sure, but it will take a very big force for sam to come out ha! and will cat be that force indeed? stay tuned and tune in to demondreaming express choo choo. OMGFLUFFNAO?

just when i was about to log off from this story for a while, my short attention span is reached. release me from my pokeball!

huh. so i was right about one thing, wrong about another and still waiting for the result of the other. no spoilage. wot? I don't like dark that much, but when i read this, i keep getting an image of cloud of haze on the sky. eerie. oh, your writing shines through tho! ;)
i did not write that metaphor just for the final sentence.

"We can be a secret.
We can be a crime."

edgy. im totes stealing that. if you start to see a song floating around with those lines, you know who to arrest. lol. but it'll take several decades to make and I'll forget it by then because i'm glued to my couch like a sack of potatoes and I'm not leaving anytime soon.

you write sam so well anyone prolly be suspicious you're her. but you know, i have a dangerous feeling you're cat instead. those a/n you write? never fail to make me howl into the deep night. so quirky and deranged, and you know who's that? cat! on a second thought, maybe I don't like you in my imaginary car after all. you're dangerous like that.

ok. they have got unlucky life cards and got in with toxic parents.. mm cat's prolly more twisted than i thought. i see the subtext mam, the bad parents (on both sides no less?) mm! Mmm.

oh my, girl, just - your writing, okay? get in me. or at least get in my car so i can bandy you around the town (I'm pretending I'm in the past, around the time you wrote this because, reasons) -and tell everyone about the horrific frankenstein mash up of this fic and its royal progenitor. OMGSEXNAO.

Okay. waow. i love how you portrayed sam here. she can be confused but she's not lashing out all the time. and the anger management and her past and avoidance that you're building up? chef's kiss

mm! it's good as i remember. well so far, because somehow my old brain's been ejected from my head. because it's incomplete imma make a prediction: based on what I've read so far - 5 chappys in, catxjade happened (tis why cat was hesitant on talking about friends, or why she gravitates toward sam and sam reminds her of a certain someone like that someone's a big deal), her parents happened lol - they found out of it and tried to pull cat as far away asf from jade and to "fix" her (tis why she don't talk bout it). or that cat kills people and birds of the same feather flock together, alright? mm the latter makes more sense since several therapist's gave up on her haha! (well, the former does too ; )

I just want to say that this piece is beautiful. The way that it was left in a cliffhanger is a nice touch. Idk if this is an unfinished work but I guess this sorta gave me an impression of an open ended story. It felt raw, it felt powerful, it felt right. Thank you for uploading this. It was wonderful.

This is my favorite fanfic about them ever I’m literally begging you to update this. Your writing is absolutely amazing and I keep coming back to this

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