I don’t know if my review will reach you. I am not entirely sure if you are keeping in touch with your FF account. But, regardless of it, i want to say “thank you”. Your writing has blown my mind. Your Henry has been amazing; his childhood, his upbringing, his ups and downs, everything to him has been outstanding. Your development of characters is out of this world, and I’m very much looking forward to you writing a book entirely your own. Thank you again for this fanfic, for it has made me wonder and think and worry and cry.

So I just finished reading both of these stories. I read your loft story years ago and happened to come across it again and re-read it again. ) I went through both in a couple days. These stories were so compelling. I don't always like original characters added to the HP story line but I have to say, I absolutely loved your characters. My heart ached when Harry lost Denny. I'm so happy you didn't kill Harry off and I can't believe how much you were able to make me love a character that was essentially "the bad guy". Bravo. Thank you for writing. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading.

awesome

Really, truly a gem.

Thank you so much for writing this story. I loved it. I think i even cried a little some where in there. Again fantastic story dont ever stop writing.

Its a great story and I think this is the third or fourth time I have read the series through you do well in the twists and turns and I love it the ending is not quite to my taste but it is crafted exquisitly and is everything an epilogue should be.

Omg I'm so said that its over this was a very well written and at times a very sad story. I loved it all together. Both PW and PS were wonderful and I'm so very glad I decided to read them because you did a marvelous job on writing them. Congratulations on a very good story and sequel.

LoneWolfSage

Hi,
thank you very much for this rather unusual story! I loved your AN's, your swear words, the smokes (I blame you for wanting to start smoking again, I try to keep the monster at bay atm with electric smokes but they just don't cut it), your rather funny chapter warnings and the whole sarcastic humour. Brilliant, and thanks again!

My body is tingling and my pulse is thrumming; this story has been such an unbelievable roller-coaster ride!

You are an incredible author, and it has been a privilege to read your work.

INCREDIBLE. Simply Incredible.

A wonderful story, thank you for sharing :)

Gosh, I cannot say anything to describe my feelings right now! The complication-the climax-and then the end. Why is it needs to be Harry? It wasnt fair-not at all.

Plot is amazing. characters, even though original ones are amazing as well. Writing style-cannot complain. This... This!

I hate Dumbledore.

And Arthur Weasley. really, that man never made me feel like hitting him, but here, I want to bash his head for being so mean. I understand his reasoning, but why is it people so selfish?

And Draco. Well, he is really the prince charming here. Love him. His personalities. and also his shortcomings. They are really show his humanity. very nice characterization.

And Bo died. I cannot say anything. that chapter had me cried so much. Argh!

overall, this is amazing. You truly are great in making all this intrication-I love this!

I am really glad to have stumbled upon this, dear. And I feel terribly silly to have only done so so very late. I have read a LOT of fics and I tell you that I can count those which I have really loved with one hand... and I give three of my digits to you.

The difference with your stories and the many others that I have read so far is that with yours, I have been eager and restless to finish without any hesitation. Others I would be easily bored of because quite frankly, I have a high standard of fine literature.

Please, continue to write. It would be a shame if remarkable talent such as yours would go to waste.

And believe me, dear. I'm not one to sugarcoat.

This might seem a random comment, but I must thank you for the vulgarity! I think the fanfiction world could use more of it. There is a lot of graphic sex in a lot of fanfics, but significantly less cursing and crudeness than I believe is appropriate, and I most certainly have never seen the phrase "get my dick wet" in a fanfic. It is delightful! (My less silly reason being I think it makes the characters more realistic)

(BTW I've decided to start reviewing whenever I have such a comment because

I think this comment is a waste of time irretrievably lost, because this story is over for a while now and don't think it possible that you answer me, but I have to express myself.

This story is magnificent. Terribly wonderful, dark and bloody to the point that one would wonder if you've ever been on a battlefield or been a member of a gang. Seriously.

Your OC characters are believable and human (as incorrectly policy). Denny, my favorite (and which I called him Danny, don't know why) was someone who not only support Harry / Henry until the last stages of his life, but it was for me a character that somehow grew up with Harry / Henry.

Harry / Henry, from a small child in Pistol Whiped to this chapter, where it looks almost destroyed yet avenging untouchable in his grace. It's scary even. I can tell you, it's a great Smart! Harry, Powerful! Harry, one of the few fics where these ingredients make a delicious plot. Because that bloody bastard has his origin and a fic not enough to describe it! How much emotion, hatred and handling excited me, hehe.

Bo's death was a great loss as the share of innocence that Harry / Henry possessed. It was a character so sweet and was fresh air after so much drama, but died an honorable though.

Draco, on the other hand, grew significantly perhaps you could say that is a character who has overcome so himself. From the Draco's books, until someone can face death for Harry. While not denying that I thought of Draco, in the beginning of this fic, as a housewife waiting for her husband who comes home from work and just expect it because it has no alternative. I can not say I liked that perspective, because I think he would have a more notable role perhaps. But then he decided on his life and things changed. I confess that Draco, despite his flaws is my favorite canon character, perhaps because his not care what anyone says, or his genius in making life difficult for others or for his inventive power. I do not know. But I think even now he had a passive role (despite being love in Harry's life) and imagine him crying with a broken heart and bloody face with an inert Harry, made me think that he,even in his dreams may contain Harry. I can't change anything by saying this. The story, while it is complete and resolved without a view from below. But I can say this, Draco was Harry's moral and support,so was the love and humanity. But he might be an equal, a person who consider someone who could stop Harry because he possessed the power to do so. Harry being the all-powerful here, the genius who commands the war, the puppeteer. Maybe its just outside Mc Callister, I think.

Sorry, I think I went too far. Not flamer or anything.

It's a wonderful story despite that. And just I'll continue reading until the last chapters, whatever its end.

Bye

Brilliantly done as always! An exciting and suspense building start to the sequel!

Sorry I hadn't read this before now. It's been a busy couple of years. Hope things are going well for you!

Cheers!