Looking forward to chapter 23, or 7 part 2 :3 peace and hope you are having a good day -

Bro, when you gonna update the story man, feeling dissapointed for the lack of updates. PLEASE COME BACK!

Please don't let this story die! You'll kill me if you do! Loving the story. For me personally it has the perfect balance of fighting, romance, mystery and the flash backs are amazing! This is a great story, please don't let it stop here. D:

Wow, jus wow.

Hopefully you're not dead in a ditch or something and never able to update this eventually haha

This isn't just an AU of a fanfic, but a truly marvelous story that you've crafted... bravo!

Wow, just wow. Very well written backstory.

Seems promising...

This fanfic. One word: Sophisticated

Dude when are you going to update? It is really frustrating cuz it's pure awesomeness, and easily the best fanfic out there! UPDATE PLEASE ! :'(

Alright, so I'm really only halfway done with Chapter 1's first part, but since I have to actually go to sleep, I thought to give my thoughts now.

I am amazed.
Though this pairing wasn't one of those I really adore and like in Mass Effect 3, I am still attracted to the dynamics you introduce and hint at in the beginning of this chapter. Also, the way you described the... planet, I think(this is the reason I don't write sci-fi fanfics)... was beyond magnificent and highly evocative. It landed me there, created a true sense of place, and made me wonder about what other interesting things your interpretation of Mass Effect's universe could show me.

So yeah. I am officially 'very' interested, not to mention surprised. I didn't honestly think I'd read another person's fanfic, and then...
*shrug* Then I read the beginning paragraphs of your story.

And now I definitely want to see where you go with it.

Xanedis

You're back. Thank you for giving me something to read.

I cant believe I missed this update!

If there is any story that deserves more reviews than it has this is it.

Excellent chapter. Thanks for updating. Please continue.

I love these flashbacks, they tell a very different story then the game did, in my humble opinion a better one.

I just cannot understand how this story hasn't gotten the attention it deserves. I began reading this a week ago, and damn mister, this is the best ME fanfiction i've read so far! Just keep writing more damn it!