Please continue dis is awesome XD

Hahahaha, totally agrees with Riku. Sora. Is. A. Total. Uke! There is no way he be the dominating one! But really, the relationship is going pretty fast for someone who thinks he's not homo... not that I don't like it X9

Go Riku! XD

update soon.

Lol! Good going there, Sims! d _ b

And cheers for Riku! Things look bright! he just have to tread carefully. Sora, enjoy your relationship with Riku. You know you love it.

BRIANNA DECKARD, NO NO NO.

Somebody edited my edit, BEFORE YOU LET ME

FINISH (- emphasis) THE EDIT!

::Beats:: BAD BAD BAD!

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Oooh, can't wait for the next chapter! Will Sora be able to cope with it? (If he doesn't you can always tie him up and leave him in a room. Alone. With Riku. Oh, the joy!) What about kairi?

Meh, come one, come one! Update soon!

Poor Sora... but also poor Riku.

That moment was kind of hot, I have to admit. I kinda like rape scenes cause it's interesting.

Thank god, Riku didn't go all the way though.

Tip Though: Don't wait till the end to do a lemon. Just ending it with a lemon makes for a incomplete story. You build up the tension, then sex. Nothing more.

What keeps the reader interested is that there's more after the lemon, so the story just doesn't survive on just the lemon.

Hope you remember that.

~Jenx

Ha. Kairi went lezbo on Sora. I'm not a big fan of Yuri, but in this case, I'll accept it.

Really good for your first fanfic.

I wish you Good Dreams and No Evil Plot Bunnies that attack you if you have Writer's Block.

~Jenx