It was great

Good yaoi

I like how the clone locked the door so they didn't have to deal with her

MWAHAHAHA! MOE! Right more my dear. ;)

super cute but this chapter was a wee bit too short for my taste. things just ended too quickly.

i am sooo luvin it but the very end were they ask sakura if she wants to join is a little too short. i feel like she should hav had contemplating thoughts er sumthin.

ADORKABLE! i love it! its soooo cute! and dont worry you will get names and events down fast... its kind of addicting lol i luv that show haha

Ahh that was getting really good didnt really want a girl joining but oh well :)) I still love it either way!

Awww that was cute lol im really liking it so far.

The sex was a little quick... is this your first time writing it?

WTF? That was really wierd

Eh... its okay. I mean, there are a few spelling and grammar errors but other than that its good.

This was probably one of the weirdest SasuNaru stories that I've read...The fact that they want to keep it a secret bothers me...I understand coming out is difficult, however both of them were so okay with being a secret couple that it was hard to believe...I mean Sasuke has girls flirt with him and Naruto can't say thing about it, which will cause problems, I just don't see it working out or at least not staying secret...Also, sex does not prove you love someone and that is not something that anyone should make you believe...if someone fed you that line they were just trying to make you have sex...if the person loves you, they will wait...if you had just made it all the pent up frustration and feelings in them led them to sex it would have been more likable than saying if you love me sleep with me...I'm not sure why you put the Sakura thing in, as it wasn't necessary for the story and I think that would have been a major mood killer for them...It was an okay story, but it feels a bit rushed, it went from I hate you to I love you to let's have sex all wrapped up in three chapters...the only way to do that is to explain what the characters are really feeling when they say I hate you or you loser but you didn't so it seemed like the characters truly went from feeling one to the other in one chapter

( nods vigurusly) good yaoi , good yaoi *

Good yaoi! Believe it! xD

Sasuke:STOP SAYING THAT!

But it's fun... :(