This fcking sucks
Die u pathetic excuse of human being

It is fantastic

"This seems hard - I'm considering single pairings; they promote realism"... seriously? In a fiction about fictitious beings set in a harem genre?

Okay, lets get rid of all science fiction because monsters are make-believe, swords made of lasers and light are scientifically impossible, and light-speed travel aboard a star-ship where the mess-hall has devices that magically conjure up five-star cuisine in a flash of light particles is NEVER going to happen.l

Aso, I am sweat-dropping the entire time I type this.

Look I don't really give a shit what people's preferences are, but don't use shitty excuses like 'realism' when you're writing fiction and don't gripe about harems when you choose a crossover with a harem genre (Yes, for those of you who only watch anime and don't read the manga, Rosario Vampire is a true harem series as one of the things STRESSED at the end and throughout the series is Demon Lords which Tsukune is very much on the way to becoming, have harems, Issa's harem is mentioned several times and he mentions it again to Tsukune in the Epilogue). If you want to make a single pairing in a harem story, then please outline it in your summary and don't bother with relationship development between multiple lead characters, that's truly what annoys me about these kinds of stories. Harem manga and anime are successful because they're funny and have comedic value, if your going to end it in a single pairing but having multiple girls interested in the lead male, then it just becomes a tedious drama, like a soap opera, especially if you're using a serious setting like this, this doesn't have the comedic value of Rosario Vampire, ergo, the tension between the girls is annoying rather than amusing.

... mom wants some grandkids and she wants then now

this story fucking suck, I'm so glad it's dead. Hes a little bitch, way more than tskune.

is this dead

I hope that they manage to destroy Naruto! The guy is even more disgusting and pathetic then Tsukune

Sorry but I am dropping this. Lol, he is just so Naruto it is disgusting! He could go to Issa or Akasha but no, he believes the bitch and every word she says. This Naruto is so guilable and disgusting just like the original now, and I hate the original. Really, the only thing missing is him going all detabauyo!

Great job please continue

Im so mad its been 7 YEARS GODDAMIT and you havent written anymore of it and you left it on a cliffhanger YOU ARE TRUE EVIL (its a good story im just venting my fustration at how nobody on this site completes there story)

I like this story

I say harem

If you could stop adding crossovers it would've been great...

Go for the Naruto x Harem. Harem prevents heartbreak ;)

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