This... This is probably one of the best. Rage was the best. This was the best.

Ok i read the prequel to this and loved it a immediately went to read this one and loved it even more! Omg the feels! X'(
It's really well written and i would love if you'd write the continuation to this, it would come out awesome!:)
But then you decide what to do;)
Great job!

I had read this a long time ago, and done so countless times since then, and I realized I never got around to actually review. Maybe I did, but I probably didn't have an account back then. The writing style is mind-blowing. The scenes and feelings are terrific. And even though I do not agree with the ending, like NATSU WHAT THE FUCK APOLOGIZE, but thé way it proceeded, the flow of the story was simply amazing. Rage left me with chills and choice summed it up in such a beautiful manner! Loved both the stories!
Just one minor thing. When Gray hugged Natsu, you mentioned a scar on his forehead. Unless the timeline is different, Gray didn't have a scar when Lisanna had died. He got one on Galuna Island.
nvm I seriously, really loves the writing. the flow. and obviously, the story.
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This story was so beautiful and realistic, you can't help but feel blissful. After reading the story, a sense of calm engulfed me and everything: Natsu and Gray's fights, their friendship, their rivalry, they all came back to me. One thing I just want to do right now is to cry for Gray. I gotta admit that I kinda wanted a different ending. Natsu didn't even have the voice to apologize. Damn, I wanted him to apologize to Gray, for all the bad things he has done. But this ending was also good. It's like telling me to always forgive, because all of us have fcked up in some points of our life, and people have forgiven us. We should learn to forgive, because forgiving is beautiful.

MY GOSH MY THOUGHTS ARE SCATTERED ALL OVER THE PLACE.

I'm so glad you wrote this sequel to Rage. I loved the switching o perspective, and the parallels between the two of them, it all came together beautifully. Thanks for writing this, because there generally aren't that many serious pieces for this pairing that are this good.

I if I possibly could, I would hug you so tight you'd see stars. And with that said I totally love this story. :3 Please keep supporting this pairing, 'coz it needs more love. _

One does not simply read this and leave without a review. I mean, this masterpiece actually existed in this site- MY GOD THIS IS HEAVEN. I was craving for more decent NatRay stories and I had no choice but to go this far. And I'm glad i did, because frankly, i missed the rare times I'd feel my nerves going haywire, and everything just pushed me off to the edge. I'm a real fan for angst stories and all this time i thought i cried enough tears for all the scars each story made on me. But this one's totally totally different... So different i can't just imagine myself forgetting this piece of art.
The thought of Gray going through all these things and yet still be forgiving and kind, how Natsu is coming to terms with himself and now knowing how Gray did everything for him-this has been more than enough of a satisfaction and feels than reading normal boyxboy rated M fics which mostly include sex.

This really moved me like no story in this section ever did, and I'm forever grateful to you for making this story because we need them so badly... You have my respect, dear author. *bows*

Its good.

I Luv IT!

amazing! that... was so cool! :D *mind has been blown

;A; My feels. This is so beautiful.
*bawls*

Your style of writing is unique and YES you should be very proud! I love it!

i loved it a lot :)

i'm an avid reader, but i've barely read fairy tail. i love angst though and so you could say i've read worse than this, yet i cant seem to find the reason why this hits me like a dagger in my heart, you killed it! killed it girl! i love your writing! this and rage were both so true in their own dark ways.

i just loved this and trust me i dont say it often. all i know is, i loved the parallels, the writing, the insanely believable plot and well...everything. needless to say i love gray n natsu, gray more so. and i have a request if i'm not being overly demanding, could you please write a gray n erza piece? angst with a your style of ending. surprise me please! i loved this more than i can tell you, and i'm sorry about the length of this review and blowing my own trumpet out there. just needed you to know what a masterpiece you crafted - the best i've come accross in this fandom till now. thanks for this wonderful piece of true beutiful writing, you totally deserve to be proud of this, i sure am of you!

and yeah, if possible change your pen name, you're far from irrelevant...:)

Ridiculously proud of it? Why shouldn't you be? It just so Awesome... Each and every line. Keep writing! You're really good at this! *bows*