I just finished reading this fanfic and i think this is one of the best H2O fanfic i could find! Not as innocent as the real series, but this fanfic able to bring me up that H2O vibe.

MAKE.

MORE.

YOU NEED TOO! SUCH A TALENTED WRITER , I BET YOU COULD MAKE IT BIG SOMEDAY!

This was really good!

First of all, "WHY? Just Why?" Do you really want another Dr. Denman on your hands? I just don't understand why you would write a story like this, or at least change the genre. to horror. Yes this is now considered a horror story, well to me, that is.

So Are you going to turn the rest of the family into merfolk, or not? And If you did, what chapter is it or is it in the Epilogue? Of if you didn't that what I'd have done. Now enough for the negative.

I like the positive about the guys turning into mermen up until the point of Lewis's capture? And Speaking which doesn't Australia have well animal protection laws and Mermaids and Mermen are considered wildlife and as well as human, so...

if you says so what? If it was possible to reach through the computer to punch you, I would. But anyways, Wouldn't their be a law about protecting the wild-life and not performing any experiments so to speak on any type of wildlife which includes merpeople and merpeople have double rights so to speak, meaning,well, Merpeople will have full rights as humans and as well as the animal protection rights wouldn't they? If not, please tell me so I can make it happen? If you don't mind.

First of All, I don't get this chapter at all? Not at all. Where did you come up with this radialized theory of yours?

I decided to leave the review for chapter 5 here, why did you bring back Dr. Denman. What are you some kind of idiot! Because i would never be shall we say so stupid to do that.

This was quite an intriguing story to read. It is perhaps darker than others I have read, but I enjoyed the change.
I am not an easy person to surprise when it comes to a plot unfolding; you, however, surprised me multiple times.

Thank you for your story.

Glad to see you finally finished the story. Was really good. Except i would like to see dedman get what she deserved, and for will and bella to gain their tails and magic back.

NICE! I LOVE IT! REALLY GOOD!

(I was too lazy to log in lol) I can't believe you worked on this for so long, I only recently started reading! I love the ending, I feel like it's very realistic and I can't wait for the sequel!

SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Please let Will and Bella find a way to get their magic back and be merpeople. I hate seeing this like this. Yes they are happy since they are together but they'd be even happier in the water.

Beautifully written plot and character development. Loved the story so much I read it be honest read it for Lewis ( He is the best character) All I can do is wait for the sequel. *Whispers* you're gonna write it soon right? Please...you have too, you are sooo talented . *I ask in a pleading tone unironically, eyes wide, lip quivering in anticipation*

NO WHY! YOU CRUEL PERSON! A cliffhanger?! Well anyways great story!

Please please please please please finsih this story soon is very good

*explodes* FINALLY! I was beginning to lose hope that they would EVER get out! Now, get yourself together and update soon so I can get MYSELF together and stop almost crying! This is angstyer than a Percy-was-betrayed-by-everyone fanfic! Seriously! *deep shakey breath* Okay, that's done. Sorry if I sounded rude, but seriously, my legs keep shaking and my nerves are shot. If this was ever made into a movie, it would be PG-13 at LEAST. But I digress; this is an amazing, nerve-wracking story, and I'm currently desperate for a happy ending. A sequel would be nice too, so long as it isn't NEARLY this adrenaline- pumping. And one more request - PLEASE DONT TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE! PLEASE! That is all, good luck and good day. *dramatically faded into background shadows*