I enjoyed this story, however it cant really be called a GrimmxIchi fic because over half of it was ShiroxIchi. You should have tagged Shiro in this fic.

I laughed and cried so hard. This is my crazy dysfunctional family thwart your story captured. Well done.

oh my god i only read that first line of the author's note and thought 'no wedding? :( okay...'
that was before i read that you would make it into a one-shot :D (it better be there... jks ;) this in itself is satisfying enough, though i wouldn't mind more...mm-mmmm, not at all :D)
i don't even know why, but the fact that this story had so much swearing had me cracking up. there wasn't even a reason to. i just found it amazingly funny "
i found it a little confusing when i first started each chapter, because the point of view wasn't all that clear. but it's like a game huh? find-the-POV-of-the-chapter!
i'm normal.
i especially loved this last chapter. i could practically FEEL Ichigo's frustration at Grimmjow leaking through the screen into me. for a lack of better way to say it. but that frustration was slammed back with the sudden 'marry me' and i myself was staring at the screen for a little before my belated fan-girl squealing...
this was honestly one of the cutest and winding stories i've ever read! at the start you got me thinking that Shiro was the one for Ichigo, and then i got so confused because it said that this was a GrimmIchi fanfic, and yeahh..
but still, i loved every second of it! great work :D

Yes he finally said it!

I fucking loved this story, my forever question will be "what happened to Gin?"

I freaking LOVE this story!
I like how the sex isn't like, BAM! sex every chapter. There is a story. A beginning, realisation, a development, and when everything has sunken in, the sex and 'I 3 U' arrives!
A very satisfying read

Please do I want to see the wedding!

AWWW wat a beautiful ending! the only thing i have to say is that i didnt really like the beginning. the whole shiro and ichigo thing kinda pissed me off. every time shiro touched ichigo i was like 'WTF get ur hand of him! hes Grimmjow's! butt i got over it as i read on, and when u made it up with some hot ichi and Grimm! haha, yeah im a pervert XD. an yeah, wonderful story, just a few typos but nothing big. well, the jello is out!

XD I pulled an all nighter just to read this. u r forever one of my favs. but now i gotta go to school on 0 hours of sleep . . . damn. :P

Every time I read this chapter I start tearing up & get all pissed at grimmjow for not saying he loves ichigo then I get all happy & excited when he asks him to marry him! So many emiotions! ~ dies of emotion overload ~

Lol grimmjow is so funny

I actually came across this fic before and read about 2 or 3 chapters...Now I found it again and decided to give it a second chance and boy ma I glad i did! One of my favorites now! Great job!

It's a great fic now...and i sorta liked the Rukia you created, a phsyco scorned wifey way at first who turned out to have much more composure~ you showed her strengths beneath the uptight facade, revealing her to be a strong woman(which I don't know was your intention or not at first...)

But! I'm totally not reviewing for her...I love ichigo goddamnit! And Grimm! and Shiro! It was a really good plot, actually, I mean, with the seduction, the temptation, the hot smut that seemed to burst...snd the twists~

Normally, I'd just pass off any story narrated in first person pov...but this is one of the few exceptions. I just always thought first person pov was...not so , rationally acceptable, I mean, it's too revealing. And I must admit, some of your chapters had me confused for the first few seconds into reading...cause sometimes, you make your different characters seem too alike. I can find the same general idea in all of them...but whatever, I mean, everyone has their own pov, right?

Another small reason I like this fic-It's friggin finished! damn it's hard to find a complete fic these days...though I must say you weren't exactly a punctual updater either...at least you'd managed to type in "complete"...

I mean, most other ones are on hiatis...argh...but I'm not here to unload, whatever.

Lol that was a funny ending and yay! Shiro didn't end up with Gin glad to see he and Renji are happy together there so adorable and I really wouldn't mind to see how the wedding turns out man Grimmjow family really were nosy though I'm not surprised they were there listening through the door XD

Lol aw...finally there dating but so for what does shiro think of this? I'm a lil worried abt that unless he ended up with gin well then I guess it's a happy ending I guess...? :/ lol Ichi lost his V card nice job Grim XD