I happen to like this "not very good" poem. Poetry is not graded the way a story is. Poetry has to come from the heart. And when it does? It's better than anything else could be. This poem holds a lot of meaning. I approve ;)

Aww :) I loved it! It was so emotional and heart felt. And I'm sorry of what happened :)

Dear Carter:

Hmm. So what book is this based on, exactly? I don't recognize it.

Sincerely,

Qoheleth

that was beautiful.

i like it its good

Oh... my... *stares*

Dude, i know how you feel. What you wrote... It's sad, but i relate.

I'm sorry. Really, really sorry.

This poem is good, even though it's sad. This problem of divorce and fathers giving up and tuning their family out.

You're not alone. Thank you for writing this, cause now i know I'm not alone.

Nice job. I thought that this was really good. :)

I personally think this is amazing.

It came from the heart and it was beautiful. Good job.

I love this. I know it's tough to deal with. I know just how you feel. This is truly an amazing poem.