Reviews for Pick Up Lines
piccolabimba chapter 1 . 5/24
Goodness this seems like a terrible bet! Glad things worked out. Thanks for writing!
KureNo11 chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
I die laughing in the middle of the night XD great job!
I think that in modern AU, better for me to imagine Kenshin with short hair and no scar on his cheek. His red hair, violet eyes, intoxicating smile, and polite manner seem more than enough for picturing Kenshin. As for Kaoru, she could have another hairstyle despite 'a high ponytail'.
At least that's what I thought :)
ak.oshirolangley chapter 1 . 5/23/2015
So cute!the poem was beautiful.
Josephine chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
So cute, funny and light-hearted. I was smiling the whole time. Loved it. More please.
UrmixMoonstone chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
Wow. Kawaii! Poor Kenshin, my heart goes out to the fellow. The ending was sweet :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
JAJA YA ME PARECÍA RARO QUE KENSHIN ACTUARA ASI JEJE Y HOO AL FINAL GANO CON AYUDA PERO GANO
desabled-.-.-.sorry chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
I really loved it. 3
meantoddy chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
so nice.. hahahahaha couldn't stop laughing. oh the chemistry! really great job here. hope this has a sequel :)
satomika chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
nice, nice, NICE!

awesome, indeed...

heeheehhee...
TheWolfsCub chapter 1 . 8/8/2012
This is a really cute story. Haha... LOL on the pick-up lines that Kenshin tried. :P
Brukaoru chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
This was great! Very funny.

I can't believe the inspiration for this story! I mean, wow! That guy really thought that it would work? XD
ramonaboat chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Hahaha!

I knew Kenshin was being forced to it. I just knew it! The un-natural pick up lines were so un-Kenshin. His pick up lines are more.. fitting .. it they're just natural. I cracked up at some of the lines. I hope a guy doesn't use it on me, or I'll have to use my Hiten Mitsurugi Ryu.. (joking!)

Good job.

-Stand, Bow, Bye!
Raymonde chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
ABOUT THE FANFICTION HIMURA & kaoru , i've sent a mail directly on my hotmail , i hope you have get it , and sorry about my English but i've notived at tapping to each time on my keyboard , i forgetting to put any letters nearly to each word.
regh chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
I really liked this one. Its unique. You should write a multi chapter story related to this one. Goodluck!
smile-lifegoeson chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
how sweet:) and cheesy at the same time. haha.
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