Magnifique, j'ai adorée ta fiction, j'ai aussi pleurer... Je trouve ta fiction très bien écrite ! Bravo et merci !

You know I read this once and cried my eyes out then stumbled on it again and cried again. I think I might hate you for writing something so beautiful but sad. :) Amazing story. To be able to bring someone to sobs in a few thousand words bravo but booo for making me cry rotfl ;)

That made me cry. It captured the emotions perfectly. :'(

Wow, that was intense - and I can't believe you only got 7 reviews? What's wrong with people. This was very good, thought-provoking - what would you do kind of thing? Okay, wiping away a tear now. Sigh.

so sad and lovely. thanks for sharing!

I actually have tears in my eyes. I'm not normally affected by sotries (in fact I'm known as being a bit heartless I do not cry easily) but this is so sad. The fact they can't do anything! It's so well written.

I loved this story even though I don't think Tony and Gibbs love each other that way. I was crying. R.I.P. Tony.

10 dang tissue to get to the end of this painful lovely story.

This is beautifully written. It made me cry! Great job!

Uhm... okaaaaaaay. One of their one being in peril is definately something different than someone actually dying.

Due to your summary, I figured they had to rescue someone, the rescue went wrong and then one of their own got into trouble. and then would be saved... I didn't expect you to actually kill own of them. An okay story, but next time, put a warning in your summary, will ya?

Congratulations on your first story! :)

I would strongly recommend putting a warning in the summary that this is a deathfic/suicide fic. It might be disturbing to some readers and I don't want you to get flamed. :)

Good story-look forward to more from you. :)

Love Jen