Oh. Damn. Ouch. My heartstrings, you're yanking them, and it's painful but so *good* at the same time.

This is so small and powerful; I love your writing style, it's beautiful.

I can't wait to read more from you.

When do you think this will be updated? Because this story seems like it will be very good

Oh my God. That was really powerful. i absolutely loved it. i wish i could describe what exactly made it so amazing, but i just don't know. at any rate, this is a very well-written piece. Thanks for posting this :D

"will [force] yourself not to fidget" you forgot a word.

ahem! *cough gag* okay. that, um. more than I can personally handle.

( Poor Fai... God, I want to know his story. And at the same time I don't. So much I don't understand... So much I wish I could make him smile for real... (Yes, I'm getting emotional over a made up character. XP)

Um, there won't be any spoilers in this, will there? And do please warn me if there are anymore, uh, happenings that go past the classification of "slight implication".

Final note: beautifully written, and...mostly in character.

Nice opening part! Great grasp of Fai's angsty-ness, brilliant take on Kuro-pyon's noble-ness. And the "T for drunken snogging"- do I detect a fellow Brit? More please!