ok this is actually amazing

I cried. So,so hard. This is beautiful.

This is astonishingly good. I loved Luke’s (probably adrenaline-fueled) rambling. And then that last sentence hits you like a punch to the stomach. Really, really wonderful.

ahhhh all the feels i'm dying! this was great. and sad. and very well written. i wish the skywalkers could have had those things - to make reparations, to know each other. (though not sure leia would forgive him) great fic thanks for sharing!

This was so sad.

Nice. Well done regrets, thinking of Leia differently, realizing all he'll miss. Well done with the detail of how Anakin is seeing things now that he's come back to himself and realizes what he's lost and wasted.

THERE GOES MY PERSONAL GOAL NOT TO CRY WHILE READING THIS

He wants to see his daughter again damnit! I can't help but giggle at that.

god this is amazing. i love how you write anakin (and his relationships with everybody around him).

So sweet!

I have read so many Vader-as-he-is-dying fics but this is the most beautiful. You have such a way with words, it's so poetic and seems to brim with aphorisms. Lovely.

Oh Ani...you'll see. You'll watch those things somehow, through the Force...

This is wonderful. I sniffled. Your characters are spot on, and the plot fits in beautifully with the film as well. This definitely filled in a little bit of the hole the movie left me with. Good stuff!

Wow. This is beautifully written. I love the way you wrote Luke, and his irrepressable enthusiasm even in the face of death. Anakin's point of view was also full of life, even though he was dying. I think my favorite part, though, was Vader's observation that some point along the line, he had started thinking of Luke as "Luke" instead of just "his son".

I quite nearly cried. That was so sad...but so good!