| Reviews for A Fairytale Ending |
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   Kolista chapter 10 . 7/30/2015 Update soon |
| cordelia.watsinhimer chapter 15 . 2/28/2015 I love it |
| cordelia.watsinhimer chapter 12 . 2/28/2015 this is adorable |
| cordelia.watsinhimer chapter 7 . 2/28/2015 *enternally screaming in happiness* It started out as sad but now it is so happy and full of hope. *almost crying* I love it |
| PrinzessTinkerbell29 chapter 15 . 7/27/2013 Plz update ssssssssssssssssoon |
| twilightmecrazii chapter 15 . 2/29/2012 Loved it awesome can't wait for more |
| BlackBeautyQueen33 chapter 15 . 2/27/2012 nice chapter. Can't wait for more. I think it would be nice for Derek to take Hotch's job but I don't really think it would be a good thing for Hotch to transfer |
| BlackBeautyQueen33 chapter 14 . 10/15/2011 God this was hot. It was a little hard to follow in the beginning but now that I am caught up I need you to update please? |
| twilightmecrazii chapter 14 . 10/6/2011 Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter |
| AkiraNatsume chapter 14 . 10/3/2011 more please |
| lust love chapter 14 . 3/5/2011 this story is so freakin amazing hope you can update soon. |
| filmgurl2008 chapter 6 . 2/4/2011 Love your story so far! I found it quite strange reading this chap, my middle name is Alice and my last name is Roberts! lol :D Gonna go read the rest now :) |
| RocklynnJasmine chapter 13 . 2/3/2011 Amazing and awesome chapter! I can't wait to read more of your amazing and awesome story! I love this story! Have a great and wonderful day! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 1/16/2011 Me likey |
| Heather chapter 11 . 1/10/2011 Overall I'm enjoying the story. Couple of things. You may want to spell check the chapters before you put them up and read through a couple of times before hand. That would catch things like 'onw' for 'now' and 'idea' for 'ID'. Fingers sometimes extend words that your brain didn't mean to be extended. Capital letters do make it look like you care, the odd missing capital isn't going to upset anyone but there a LOT of missing capitals. Both these things detract from the reading experience and mean that you may lose readers you otherwise would keep. Finally Chapter 11 is in twice. This gives your reader the chance to read it again or risk missing the 'correct' version. |
