Reviews for Punishment
susantrules chapter 13 . 7/7/2014
I am completely team bill and the show bothered me so much in that whole fairy world craziness...showing bill moving on and what not. This fic was a better way to handle the betrayal.
wally wally woof woof chapter 7 . 7/22/2012
holy fuck! a wanking bill! yum!
wally wally woof woof chapter 6 . 7/22/2012
holy hell! i loved this one! more like this please!
wally wally woof woof chapter 5 . 7/22/2012
i love that bill is conflicted about being human or vampire. i truly love this story. well done you
wally wally woof woof chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
i love all things vampire, always have done, always will do, so this is the perfect story for me.
wally wally woof woof chapter 3 . 7/22/2012
fangtasia is such a great name, i really need to watch this show
wally wally woof woof chapter 2 . 7/22/2012
too short! i need more, off to read the next one! i unnerve myself all the time, but thats usually when i look in the mirror!
wally wally woof woof chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
i bloody loved this! loved it! as you know, i havent read or watched true blood before but if this is any indication to what its like, i might just have to give it a look see!
EnglishChocolate chapter 13 . 2/15/2012
Hell yes. A fabulous read if there ever was one. Seriously, i say again the guys at TrueBlood HQ really need to give this story a read or two, because this is something the on screen Bill n Sookie have been lacking. I wish i knew their address. Then i could write them...oh well.
EnglishChocolate chapter 12 . 2/15/2012
Oh God i think i'm in love, this is goregous!
EnglishChocolate chapter 9 . 2/15/2012
From exhaustion to a gentle fuck...you gotta love it.
EnglishChocolate chapter 8 . 2/15/2012
I love your writing style just as much as i love this story. Kudos to you.
EnglishChocolate chapter 7 . 2/15/2012
Thank God for writers Authors like you man...seriously i love people who aren't afriad to really go for it. And you really really do go for it. Fingers up Bill's bum - hell yes.
EnglishChocolate chapter 6 . 2/15/2012
GOD DAYYYYMNNN! You know i was gonna wait till the end to review this story but i just can't wait that long because oh my god daaaaaymmmnnn was this chapter good. And it's only 6 chapters in, my god if chapter 6 is this good what have you got in store for us for the rest of the chapters.

TrueBlood HQ seriously need to read this story because they really could use the help at the moment. For me when i first started watching TrueBlood i really loved Bill. And in my opinion the first episode is still by far the best episode of all the series. And the first season is in my opinion the best. But of late i am becoming very disappointed in the way they hace written Bill. He's become bland and boring, while Eric has stayed his annoyingly yet hard not to like self. It annoys me because Bill never used to be like that at all. When he first walked into the bar he had an old cowboyish feel to him, hair messy but good looking, old coat and so on...but now he combs his hair so its perfectly coiffed and is so straightlaced he resembles very little of what he was in season 1. And now that we have just started season 4 here in England i find myself still very disappointed. Where's the fire gone?

This story however shows me that there are people out there who really can see the potential Bill has which is why i think TrueBlood HQ should really read this story if nothing else, because this is the kind of fire that has been missing for the passed 3 seasons.

The 12 episode seasons are also something that really has become an annoyance because it simply isn't long enough to get really stuck in. On account of the short seasons at times i feel they leave things out that really would help tell the story better and put things in that are not needed and at times leaves me confused and unsatisfied...

This story gives me hope. I just don't understand why there isn't more BillSookie stories out there...though some of the EricSookie stories are hot, and i would be lying if i said i haven't had thoughts of a BillSookEric threesome...but you can't blame a girl. I mean i think she will always be Bill's and should always be...but maybe Bill and Eric come to a sort of truce and Bill and Sookie's relationship is strong enough that they can handle a threesome without any problems...well my mind is running away from me :)p

Anyways, this story rocks, is super hot and i'm off to go read some more.
SL chapter 13 . 8/28/2011
Wow, that was one hell of a story, thumbs up for that one. It was smutty as hell and had some interesting psychological background as well.

There are so few good Bill/Sookie stories around, but this is one of the best I read.

I am impressed, please write more or just continue this one...
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