Loved the ending!

this was a really good fic. other than the occasional spelling/grammar error here and there, and once in a while the characters seemed a bit OOC, but all in all it was a fantastic story! although, im still pondering over the super inhuman strength of Neal Caffrey... is he a super hero! just kidding, we'll leave that down to pure adrenaline, but seriously, he got stabbed! he really wouldn't be able to walk around as much as he was... oh well. it was really good, i enjoyed reading it. this story has its own unique plot, and it still managed to be well, believable! in conclusion, great job!

not sure if you've still taking WC fic ideas, but I'd really love to see a WC/Psych crossover. Forgot to include that in my review of the last chapter :)

I greatly enjoyed this story up until Peter couldn't get a hold of Hughes and went off on his own. Even if Hughes had gone home and wasn't available (which, considering the situation, I find very hard to believe) someone would have been available to authorize the mission. I think you might have worked it if the kid had said he'd only take the three of them his way, and when they got there they'd called in the backup and there was some delay in them getting there. You then could have come up with something like someone screaming to get Peter to go in before backup, thus getting back to the way you wrote it.

Loved it sooo much... Awesome story

This story was such an intense read! I love the premise and all the characters you created, especially Will.

great chapter. i loved this story. great job. i still think it was so cool how there was an episode like this. that is just so neat. i think you should write neal tucking his young daughter into bed and telling her goodnight. i think that would be absolutely adorable. loved the story. :)

Nice plot :) glad everything worked out.

Prompt: Mozzie, espresso,purple

Awww, what a nice last chapter. You tied everything together and gave everyone a happy ending. Mozzie's "You're not all bad, Suit" is hilarious. Good work! :D

Fantastic ending!

Awwwwwww! Such a great story! I loved how Neal was so worried about keeping El safe for Peter! And how he basically got kicked out of the hospital :)) Great job!

great chapter!

Sorry for the late reply! This is a great chapter. Peter, Diana, and Jones save the day, as usual. I liked Jones and Diana's little ploy to get inside Davin's house, and I laughed when Peter told Neal to not damage himself anymore. :)

Well, its been a very long time but this has wrapped up to a nice climax. Good job.

nice chapter! i'm glad Neal and Elle were finally found and relatively ok!