this story makes me feel sad but happy at the same time.
i enjoyed it.

SEQUEL!

Rax obviously fell to the dark side the second he stepped on that ship

Soooo good.

um one big mistake in this chapter.

Right at the end you say 'I will kill one life to sacrifice countless others.'

Should it not be 'I will take one life to save countless others.'?

Other than that I am really digging this story!

Great story! I'm absolutely loving it!

This story was amazing. Please, continue the sequel! It means so much more after reading this!

D'waaaa! *wipes tears* Such a bittersweet ending! :')

This was a very captivating story. I like how you captured Grievous's true nature but embellished him with a semblance of humanity and depicted him as a possible caring, fatherly figure. If you were to create a sequel, perhaps you could write about Celia's daughter (if she has one) and how that child could cross Grievous's path? I entertained the idea that bounty hunters could capture Celia and it would be up to Grievious to get her back. I do hope you continue with your writing. Thanks for posting this, it was a great read!

Author's notes are not allowed as chapters. Reported.

Glad to hear you're still with us and I'm looking forward to more from you.

All my life my favorite chsrecters hsve always been the villans. As you proboly know, villains aways lose. Farvriots lose over and over again. I constantly feel hopeless as a result. I always had a fandom of general grivieus. Its like eferone frogot about general griveus. Once when I was little a saw a cool spider man mega blocks. Even back then grieveus was my favorite charecter ever. But I also wanted a fancy model of general grievous in a case. Im not sure but I think the case is cylinder. I wanted them both but my dad would only let me pick one. I picked the spiderman mega blocks, a decision I would regret a long time later. If I could find anouther copy of the grievous model a would buy it without hestiation. You really opened my hear in this story. I love storys like this.

A passionate and undrrstanding fan ps. Sorry abouth grammer and puntuation I wrote all this on my samsung galaxy. I will support you all the way.

Hurray! This is excellent news! :D I'm so excited that you've decided to write a sequel! Thank you for making my day! :D

That's great. Actually I wasn't expecting a sequel, but I'm glad that there will be one. Grivous is one of my favourite SW characters (of all timelines and universes). Right behind Darth Nihilus, Visas Marr, Shaak Ti and Luminara Unduli. It's really a shame that he died in RotS. Meh, fuck it.

Back to the topic - I really hope that the sequel will be as good as first part. I'm curious how you will menage to fit Grievous into the New Republic era, considering he's quite recogniza... recog... (fuck...) recognizable (sheeeeit, is that a word I'm looking for?). I won't even mention his eventual meeting with New Jedi Order.

Cheers. Przemeker, out.

Oh my... This is one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. The story, the characters, no OOC-s, and you can actually bond with characters as they do with each other. And I actually cried a little bit at the end of chapter 18 :'( Great work, I can't find words to thank you properly.