Thank you for this wonderful story.. Absolutely loved it:)

NOPE NOPE NOPE

I'M OUT

I'm crying right now. And I don't cry often.

So sweet!

I have only read one chapter but am already eager to see what is next. So far, so good.

Such a good story. I couldn’t stop reading itdidn’t want it to end 3

I really enjoyed reading this! Very well written.

Really thank you for share your work, I really appreciate your style and the plot.
In general I have real doubts about negative review: if the work it’s just to bad, it’s better just give up. But you have a good work, so let’s go.

This Elizabeth’s attitude doesn’t make sense, even though if she became a stupid and stubborn child, it’s to much.
What have start as a sweet romantic plot with some anguish and a enjoyable read became so much drama and Dragged since same chapters.
The plot should move on instead to focus in the Elizabeth’s nonsense.

I don’t have plans to kill you and even last to stop reading ... just move on for the next chapter ...

Thanks again for your work.
Although I am having a joyful time with this history, I could not like this Elizabeth that looks like a insecurity Lydia (if I can use this two works together) ... I can understand that she is sad and hurt but she could have a little more faith in Darcy...

Thank for share your work;
I am having a good time with the plot; although I could not think about the main suspects could be Wickham and LC.
Just one point that maybe, could be betterin my opinion: Elizabeth here is a sweet and romantic woman in love with Darcy, and I love sweet romance, Tksbut her love and confidence for Darcy did not last, and we have again the Elizabeth so insecure, prejudice and stubborn? Please, I really like more the sweet, intelligent and romantic..

That was a suspence-packed ride, oh my! I honestly suspected Caroline Bingley to be the mastermind ... Very satisfying ending for E and D. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story!

I throughly enjoyed reading this! Job well done!

Reading for the third time ️

Thank you for writing!

Great job turning the woman into nothing more than a plot device. The problem with the idea of 'I must keep this threat a secret to protect someone' is not only that it makes absolutely no sense (she's better protected if she's on guard against a threat nitwit husband) but it removes almost all agency from the character. Nearly everything that happens in this story is something that happens *to* Elizabeth that she has to react to. The one point you could have given her, the right to have actual lasting effects from the 'protection' by being angry or making him rebuild trust you short circuit because he 'feels sorry and was hurting himself too' and to tie off the plot with a neat bow. But it leaves the female character as nothing more than a china doll doing whatever the plot demands rather than an actual developed character.