| Reviews for Whenever You Call |
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futurecullen26 chapter 54 . 7/21/2018 Such a beautiful and heart-wrenching story :,) love love loved it so much |
Mrs.EdwardCullen109 chapter 54 . 5/28/2018 I also love the banter between Bella and Edward. It's so halt and carefree and always makes me laugh. |
Mrs.EdwardCullen109 chapter 54 . 5/28/2018 Beautiful story, and loved the ending. Edward had been through a LOT more than most people will ever have to go through, but I'm glad that he made it through with Alive and Bella. |
Guest chapter 54 . 3/21/2018 Amazing, i read it in 2 days! |
fanfictionalcolic chapter 21 . 12/12/2017 Just minor correction on the French sentence : Êtes-vous prête à y aller jeune demoiselle ? Prêt is an adjective and agree on gender with the subject ( Alice) so it got changed in prête. The verb aller cannot be used without a preposition like "to" , here it's replaced by "y". To what Alice would answer "oui je le suis monsieur ". :) |
fanfictionalcolic chapter 8 . 12/11/2017 It's really bizarre that Edward has type 2 diabetes as normally this disease affects older people with weight issue. |
fanfictionalcolic chapter 6 . 12/11/2017 The translations are impeccable. Just minor correction. As it's Alice speaking the sentence is " Je Suis très heureuse " . The sentence " je suis très heureux" is used when the subject is a male...past participle agree on gender and number when used after the auxiliary verb être. Yeah I know complicated stuff. |
Rita01tx chapter 54 . 11/29/2017 IED or not, Edward is fuckin' awesome and I'm so glad I found your story! Thanks for leavin' it up for us to still enjoy! |
Rita01tx chapter 53 . 11/29/2017 Such a sweet place to leave them *le sigh!* |
Rita01tx chapter 52 . 11/29/2017 Emmett is the best big brother ever lettin' Edward stay at his house, too, until Alice settles in! And poor Alan is in for a rough ride...one I hope he survives *sigh!* Loved the muffin proposal LOL! |
Rita01tx chapter 51 . 11/29/2017 Ah, ha! The ol' disappearin' act! Well, that works for me and I think lettin' Alice go to Emmett and his family is an awesome decision...a win win for all parties! |
Rita01tx chapter 50 . 11/29/2017 After such a wonderful day with Alice, I'm glad Mommy and Daddy *eyeroll* aren't comin' to get her...maybe Daddy flipped out and did a really baaad thing! |
Rita01tx chapter 49 . 11/29/2017 Love watchin' Edward grow into the man we all knew he could be! But how awesome is Emmett? Had he snotsobbin' at the end, damn it! |
Rita01tx chapter 48 . 11/28/2017 Awww, poor Edward! And he was havin' such a good time bondin' with his new family members! |
Rita01tx chapter 47 . 11/28/2017 Well, that was a lot for Emmett to take in but I'm glad he and Rosalie are invitin' Edward and Bella into their lives! And Charlie and Renee are damn cool parents! |