Quite okay, but I'd rather see a Robin/Starfire pairing...

I would like to see this as a full story. Shadow and Star whould be a good couple.

i would love a series it would rock definetly somthing i would read

I'm glad that you are able to write fanfics off of your fanfics. That shows creativity.

Love it! And if you turn it to a series could be interesting.

Good stuff! and do whatever you want chrome!

I think it would make for a funny series

awesome what if my friend! keep it up!